|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
A very strong and intense write . . . blessings always!
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|I have been there my friend. A classy way to describe a depressed moment!|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Get out of that place in a hurry.
Perhaps Chrissy is on to something with the cookies and milk.
Don't forget to dip them in the milk. They taste better than way.
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|A very bad place indeed,you describe it just as it is,I was there once,a horrid place to be.
You are such a great writer Tinka.
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Oh my! I agree with Ed, this too shall pass. In the meantime...have some cookies and milk!|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|This, too, shall pass, Tinky - if one only has enough faith.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|We all have these days Tinks. But you're a winner..|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Hi, Sweet Tinks. I can feel the emotion in this piece. Good to read you again despite the sadness of the poem. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|Dear friend...you work is indeed getting more and more vivid, better as time goes on. I hope this particular piece is not factual, for you do not need to be in such a place. Take care my friend and stay in touch.|
|Reviewed by William Haynes
|Demons often lie, Hope you discover the light soon, it's out there.
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by jude forese
|look out of that bad place and and see the beauty surounding you ...|
|Reviewed by m w
|Grace will find you Tinka, be strong, hold on.... you will survive even this. God is with you.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Tinka you don't belong in a bad place, get the hell out of there!
The poem is superb, but the idea that it conveys is not. Take care please!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|The author is floundering in rings of madness, of every-dayness, of life. I would offer her a chocolate chip cookie, would I could...
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Very sad, Tinka.
|Reviewed by Sara Coslett
|That's too bad 'cause the pic looks like a beautiful place. ~ Sara|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As we have all walked in the shadows of darkness in our lifes this too shall pass. soon you will walk again in the sun dear Tinka and know the walk was worth it.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Tinka, I've been reading you for several years now...and you keep getting better and better. This is a gem.
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|I agree with Richard...you're in the loop for better days and you are a strong woman. All your writings are strong...eveb at your lowest you float right up and make everything better. I support you and I believe in you Tinka.
Love and harmony,
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Tinka . . .
I am beginning to believe that you are in training for something much grander than you could ever imagine.
Suffering is a form of refining!
Feel what you are feeling but don't let it rot the roots of who you are.
STAND STRONG! And focus on the good at the end of the day, not what rankled you and what is unresolved!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Tinka, lighten up.|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|this is an incredible work...I can only hope that it's not personal for you.
|Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
|I wish I could sing this for you! a take off where Peter and Rhonda left off.
ONLY YOU----- can, make YOUR deams, come true
ONnn LY YOU------ can be TRUE to YOU
ONLY YOU--- can fill your heart,
with His-- power and once aGAIN START,
ONLY YOU, ONLeeee YOUuuuhuuhuu!!
Take charge, sis!!! thru His mighty love and strength, HE'll GET YOU THRU----- BUT IT TAKES--YOU-- TOO!!
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Tinka-sweetie, Peter is exactly right! ONLY YOU...square your shoulders, and directly face whatever it is, and don't blink. Call on your Inner Reserve......through Him, you are MORE than a Conqueror - you are an OVERCOMER!................'Only...BELIEVE', whispers Jesus.
love & hugs & prayers, Rhonda
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Swim before you sink.|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
You are caught between a rock and a hard place...
Only you can extricate yourself from it...
|Reviewed by Steve Patterson
a gentle kiss.
quiet an extrodandary write, darlin'.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Tinka! What is wrong? Please, do come out of there! You don't belong into any bad places, even though you write well about it,
Love , B&R