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Bad Place
by Tinka Boukes

Thursday, July 06, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Bad Place

 

I am within this very bad place

So malevolent and oh so very dark

Serious is a kind word to describe the facts

The bitter taste of demons voice jubilates

Over clouding all beauty thatís left behind

Bitter emotions choke me up

Suffocating heart

Dying

 

Copyright © 2006  Tinka Boukes
 

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 10/22/2008
Tinka,

A very strong and intense write . . . blessings always!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 7/21/2006
I have been there my friend. A classy way to describe a depressed moment!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/8/2006
Get out of that place in a hurry.

Perhaps Chrissy is on to something with the cookies and milk.
Don't forget to dip them in the milk. They taste better than way.

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 7/8/2006
A very bad place indeed,you describe it just as it is,I was there once,a horrid place to be.
You are such a great writer Tinka.
Love from
kay.
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 7/7/2006
Oh my! I agree with Ed, this too shall pass. In the meantime...have some cookies and milk!
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/7/2006
This, too, shall pass, Tinky - if one only has enough faith.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/7/2006
We all have these days Tinks. But you're a winner..
Reviewed by Nordette Adams 7/7/2006
Hi, Sweet Tinks. I can feel the emotion in this piece. Good to read you again despite the sadness of the poem. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by E. Richardson 7/7/2006
Dear friend...you work is indeed getting more and more vivid, better as time goes on. I hope this particular piece is not factual, for you do not need to be in such a place. Take care my friend and stay in touch.
Reviewed by William Haynes 7/7/2006
Demons often lie, Hope you discover the light soon, it's out there.
Bill
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/7/2006
troubling read,
Reviewed by jude forese 7/6/2006
look out of that bad place and and see the beauty surounding you ...
Reviewed by m w 7/6/2006
Grace will find you Tinka, be strong, hold on.... you will survive even this. God is with you.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/6/2006
Tinka you don't belong in a bad place, get the hell out of there!
The poem is superb, but the idea that it conveys is not. Take care please!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 7/6/2006
The author is floundering in rings of madness, of every-dayness, of life. I would offer her a chocolate chip cookie, would I could...

With love,

Erin
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/6/2006
Very sad, Tinka.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/6/2006
That's too bad 'cause the pic looks like a beautiful place. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/6/2006
As we have all walked in the shadows of darkness in our lifes this too shall pass. soon you will walk again in the sun dear Tinka and know the walk was worth it.

Fee
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/6/2006
Tinka, I've been reading you for several years now...and you keep getting better and better. This is a gem.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 7/6/2006
I agree with Richard...you're in the loop for better days and you are a strong woman. All your writings are strong...eveb at your lowest you float right up and make everything better. I support you and I believe in you Tinka.

Love and harmony,
Susan
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/6/2006
Tinka . . .
I am beginning to believe that you are in training for something much grander than you could ever imagine.

Suffering is a form of refining!

Feel what you are feeling but don't let it rot the roots of who you are.

STAND STRONG! And focus on the good at the end of the day, not what rankled you and what is unresolved!
Richard
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/6/2006
Tinka, lighten up.
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 7/6/2006
this is an incredible work...I can only hope that it's not personal for you.

Susan
Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor 7/6/2006
I wish I could sing this for you! a take off where Peter and Rhonda left off.
ONLY YOU----- can, make YOUR deams, come true
ONnn LY YOU------ can be TRUE to YOU
ONLY YOU--- can fill your heart,
with His-- power and once aGAIN START,
ONLY YOU, ONLeeee YOUuuuhuuhuu!!
Take charge, sis!!! thru His mighty love and strength, HE'll GET YOU THRU----- BUT IT TAKES--YOU-- TOO!!
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia 7/6/2006
Tinka-sweetie, Peter is exactly right! ONLY YOU...square your shoulders, and directly face whatever it is, and don't blink. Call on your Inner Reserve......through Him, you are MORE than a Conqueror - you are an OVERCOMER!................'Only...BELIEVE', whispers Jesus.

love & hugs & prayers, Rhonda
Reviewed by George Carroll 7/6/2006
Swim before you sink.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/6/2006
Tinka
You are caught between a rock and a hard place...
Only you can extricate yourself from it...
Peter
Reviewed by Steve Patterson 7/6/2006
Breath!!!!
feel love.
a gentle kiss.
breath.

quiet an extrodandary write, darlin'.
TX
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 7/6/2006
Tinka! What is wrong? Please, do come out of there! You don't belong into any bad places, even though you write well about it,
Love , B&R



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