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A MESSAGE FROM BEYOND- Pt 9 of Cookies Gotz No Brains
by A PAX

Thursday, July 06, 2006
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Bergman Chiselpecks - Richard Cederberg
Ed The Schizophrenic Jersey Devil- Capt'n Sprinkles - Ed Matlack
Rufuz The Master - Rufuz Matlack
Good Queen A Pax - Good Queen A Pax
Ogre Ed - Ogre Ed
Frumpalina  - Chrissy McVay
Lizard Lin - Lin Gayton
Ms Mighty Red - Sherry Heim
Dave Sometimesiquat - Paul Williams
A MESSAGE FROM  BEYOND- Pt 9 of Cookies Gotz No Brains
Frumpy was upon her her knees
Kissing the toes of her brother
Suddenly she stopped short
With a craving for peanut butter
This is not my brother Ed
But a decoy made from jam
As clones go he's weird looking
Is he Ogre, fiend, or man
Suddenly they all turned back
And gaped at the TV
Where they saw a sight so horrid
On cable channel 3
There was GOOD Queen A Pax
With a needle and a knife
Torturing a cookie
Who begged her for his life
That's not me I swear it
That is a look a like
She's a blond for crumbs sake
I'm brunette with roots of white!!!(notice my roots?)

Even Ms Mighty Red was at a loss for words!!!

This is all a set up
What else can now go wrong
When Bergie leaned towards Frumpy
The Queen knew all ..........along
They were in Love!!
I have been a foolish queen
To believe after all these years
Your heart was mine dear Chiselpecks
And that's why you were here
The lovers sighed and shrugged
Both're still our Queen
We'll join in your fight
And share in all your dreams
A Pax understood too well
The crown was a lonely place
She punched herself between the eyes
As tears streamed down her face
She cried
Placed On Pedestal To Fall
Loved by none, and loved by all
Placed on pedestal to fall
Nudged then shoved, gripping air
Grasping one cares
Thru the cold, falling down
Blinded by.....the slipping crown
All the words.....thought and said
Pulling down like weights of led
All the tears, never cried
All the sorrows....pushed aside
Clear confusion rushing by
No answer to.....the reason why
 Then Bergie gave the Queen a map
To an island he discovered
Where he found scrolls of magic
To help Cookies recover
Oh Joy! All Batter Now!
They planned to set sail right away
But stopped short in their tracks
Music came from over the wall
Announcing an attack
Frumpalina cried!!
 Oh Lard! Here come the Munchies
They're after Lizard Lin
Run back to your ship
Or Lin becomes din din
But it was not the Munchies
But an old man glowing bright
With a Vodka bottle in his hand
He waved a flag of white
I am Dave Sometimesisquat
I have been to other planets
I know the truth of Ogre Ed
Listen to me dammit
That boy cannot help himself
The aliens took his mind
And filled it up with batter
Along with lemon rinds(That explains the smell)
He was an experiment
That went so horribly wrong
He started eating all their food
And belching to their songs
They  kicked him off the mothership
For he tried to eat them too
They washed their hands of humans
When he drank their rocket fuel
I was given the awful task
Of watching after Ed
But once we hit the earth again
I looked at him and fled

Now I'm feeling guilty
Because our world is so divided
But if we try to heal the boy
The world will be united
To Be Continued


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/9/2006
A tour de force!

Will check out Ed's inspiration to all this.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/8/2006
well done yet again...hope to read more!!

Love tinka
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 7/7/2006
I'm such a tart! Wonderful addition to the Cookie wars...
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 7/7/2006
Oh my, how we love those! You and the ogre have to give the world a chance to get their hands on those in one fat book (a framed cookie on the side might work along with it...)
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/7/2006
It's only a temporary condition - I swear!

A virus perhaps that I contracted on that bloody island where the scroll was found with the new recipe.

My heart belongs to no other - honest bloody injun!

Seriously highness, your poem, Placed on Pedestal to Fall is quite beautiful. Use lemon juice on the back of the parchment you recieved, with a little heat, I wrote a message to you in invisible ink.


Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/7/2006
Hmmm, leaves we in a paradox, Ed the Schizophrenic!

"It does leave us with an enigma Andy,"

"indeed it does Andy."

" What shall we do about it Andy?"

"Erm we better go and have a chat with us."

"Good idea,"

"thanks Andy,"

"but you have good ideas too."



"Thanks, seya in the mirror then"

Reviewed by Nordette Adams 7/7/2006
LOL. I know this is a lot of work, but we love the results. :-) Good Queen A Pax fits you. ~~Nordette
Reviewed by William Haynes 7/7/2006
I'm rooting for ED
Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/7/2006

I concur with Eileen below completely...

This Cookie Wonder has been the ideal showcase for you and Ed ( Ogre ) to display your incredible visual, and creative talents..

The Den will never be the same again...LOLS

This series must never end....or at least make a book about I strongly sense it would be a winner !!!

And I am usually right...:)

Love your animated graphics too...

And could there be a little romantic opening developing, for that nasty Ogre Ed to exploit....a little chink in the armour and amour of the cunning Queen A Pax !!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/7/2006
My 'Good' Queen Evil One,

Even I, a wretched old ogre, find myself weeping here at your tragically sad poem. I hadn't thought about poor old Dave Sometimesiquat in many years.

Truly Shameful, Evil One.

But I am very sad to hear that old Chiselpecks wasn't the man you thought he was - to dump you for Frumpy - what a cad! And my sister - wow - I think she's as wicked as you!

But luckily, I think I've found the perfect match for you. Will Be back Soon.

A Very Sad Ogre Ed
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/7/2006
World peace depends of healing Ed. Well, good luck as you have a go at the true meaning of peace on earth.
Reviewed by Cynth'ya 7/6/2006
Your sense of humor is astounding!
blessin's, oh Queen of the Den!
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/6/2006
I'm thinking of a solution

For all cookie folks to win

Perhaps we make a cocktail

With rocket fuel and gin

Give it to ol' Ogre Ed

And wait for him to fart

Then light the gaseous vapors

And watch his body dart

Up into the great beyond

And twice around the moon

I will put my money on the fact

That he won't be returning soon!

You show your amazing talents in this continuing saga, Good Queen. Between you and Ed, we have the battle of the Golden Quills going on here.

Take care,


Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/6/2006
If nothing else Queenie this series is a showcase for your talent! You are wowing us all, keeping up with the mighty OGRE ED himself!
Now I'm wondering are you really so sweet or does he know you better than we do;-) hmmmmmmm
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/6/2006
You are one clever writer.
This is superb.


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