|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|I love every sentence in this romantic, beautiful POEM!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|This is wonderfully done & the image is divine. Certainly one of my favorites, Dear Karla
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|How beautiful and how true.I am sending this
gem to my son -he will love it too -as I do.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the creative ability you have shown in this write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Can You See Me ?????
As you walk your shoreline...
Can you see me?
In the depth of the ocean
I am down at the bottom
Where shells dance and bump
As you walk your shoreline
Can you hear me?
I am restless…
And always ready to change
They call me EB & FLOW
Can you feel me?
I am the sand under your feet
The wetness of the sand…
Are… those tears…
That rolled down my face
Each time you walk a shoreline
There will be another storm…
Deep within me… I rumble
Each silver sunray on the horizon
Another blessed kiss send your way!!
Copyright © 2003 ~ 2005 Tinka Boukes
All Rights Reserved
|Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook
|Wow, Karla ~ this is definitely my cup of tea! :)|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|This is more spirituality than simple romantic poem, karla. God is where ever we are and in whatever we see or touch. I save this one dear sister/friend
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Beautiful poem and picture..
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Beautiful write here Karla, keep it up and be blessed in the writing
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
This is sooo beautifully-written! Lovely piece indeed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Oh darn! Not when I'm in the lingerie dept....|
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|This is one master piece! Karla, this is stunning work, we'll have to save it!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Karla this is special and really worth saving. Thank you for sharing such a treasured piece.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Karla, this is a lovely work.
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
I agree with Sherry's astute and shrewd comments below...
She always seems to have the most appropriate comments
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Well, hell, this was just lovely.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I Think You've Penned Quite a Poetic Gem Here, Karla!!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|This is an absolute beauty of a write, Karla. I am keeping this as a reminder that we are each so very special and that we are blessed by everything in this lifetime. We get two things delivered to us, blessings and blessings in disguise. It is sometimes a bit more of a test to recognize the latter, but with time and introspection, we will find the blessings there also.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Splendid tribute to the I Am, the One and Only Truth!
Beautiful poem, Karla!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
O, this is so beautiful! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Powerful! Beautiful! A Storm-Spinner Special, as only you can pen, Karla!!!
Loved it! Thanks for the boost.........love&hugs, Rhonda