A Place (poem) by Alaysha Kianna on AuthorsDen

After spending precious time with Mother Teresa I wanted to share her warm spirit, wisdom and unconditional love with this book...

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A Place by Alaysha Kianna Wednesday, July 12, 2006 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I see in my future a whole lot of hope. And a world full of people who've learned to cope. I see a place where thoughts are free, where people will listen and I don't talk to me. Where people are happy and freedom is used and all the children are no longer abused. A place where it's beauty you see all the time. A place where criminals are set free of crimes. A place where rainbows shine all day, where everything bad is all thrown away. A Place where streams reflect the sun, a place where freedom can say it's won.�

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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)	7/12/2006

Sounds a bit like the old folks home, down road across the field.. Think it's called rainbows end..




Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)	7/12/2006

Reminds me of Dr. King...and his dream. Beautiful...




Reviewed by Frederick Barnes III	7/12/2006

Alaysha Kianna. This piece of writing was refreshing! Don't we all wish this place existed? Nice rhymes and great rhythm! That's about all I have to say. Can't expect much advice from a kid ;)




Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger	7/12/2006

Thanks Alaysha.




Reviewed by Karen Cino	7/12/2006

Hey...where is this place and I'll be on my way. A true and awesome write. Karen




Reviewed by Peter Paton	7/12/2006

Alaysha This wonderful place sounds like El Dorado Something to aim and plan for.. Peter