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John 3:16: 'For God so loved the world, that He gave His Only Begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have everlasting life."


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the Destroyer pries
the air from your lungs,
eagerly:  he is determined
to spread the wasted
ashes of your soul over
the parch'd landscape.
 
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the thief that stalks
your soul is out there,
in the hazy heat and
humidity, giving you a
preview of what hell
certainly must be.

Hot.

The flames roar; his
torment marked by the
smoldering ruins and
cries of pain that
echo in the distance:
ones that could be ours.

Hot.

At least, here on Earth,
relief comes in cooling
showers and the change
of seasons, and in the
promise of salvation:
choose life and avoid the

Heat.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.



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Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
A really great write! Try to stay cool,
Love and Hugs, B&R
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Superb poem Karla, with fiery imagery that stirs the senses!
Write on sweet soul!


Thanks for all the prayers right back atcha;-)

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Excellent form and crafting, Karla. You make the point so visually and persuasively and certainly bring more than a little something of the intensity of the truth to bear here. Love the clarity and penetration. Very well done! And thanks for all your family prayers... I'm fine as far as I know, but that's not saying a lot!! :)) LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Love the last verse. As Andre says, "Never rest your pen, poet." :-)
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Amazing write here, I love this piece
God Bless
Michelle!
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Too hot to dance and too wet to plow again today. The weather guru is saying this is our fate for ther rest of this week. If it's this hot what will August and September's heat be like I wonder.
Keep it cool!
Love and breezes,
Susan
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Gotta beat that heat..
But if there was no heat, then there could be no light, cos, heat make light, and light puts out the dark.....
I'll be up all night thinking this one through...

Thanks Hotty Texas Totty...
Reviewed by richard cederberg
A very clever extrapolation of the gospels dear Karla.

"Choose Life and avoid the heat" INDEED!

There is judgement coming for those who do not choose the Truth. I will bet my eternal life on it!

I salute your ingenuity poet!

Stand strong in your trials, the rain is coming!

Richard
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Well written Karla!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Taking the Word to the masses are you, Karla. Nice going . . .
Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
We should not let the devil steal our hearts as otherwise we shall find ourselves in the eye of the fire. Powerfully written
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
very, very cool! (no pun intended!)

Susan
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Karla~

Good message in this smoldering write; very well penned! BRAVA! Loved the spiritual references here; outstanding!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Karla

We would do well do avoid the " Big Heat "...
Run for cover...:)

Peter
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