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i wrote this fast too
by Richard Christopher Criso Suarez

Thursday, July 20, 2006
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i wrote for an isalnder friend

As far as what happened

the first time my eyes connected with yours

I am will never understand

never come close to being quite sure

the planet seemed to stop

you words mesmorized me and

your beauty left me shocked

when you open your mouth

I flipped out

I couldn’t stop smiling and nor could you

all the while you were saying crazy senseless things

things from no w on I would not live with uot

so wild but we both new

it made no difference

Your voice was the soothing noise

I had always needed to hear.

And all in a moment I knew it

I loved you

and I saw the same in your eyes

and all you did to keep there

was a paradise

I left the store in a daze

I went home and immediately

returned to find you

locking up the place


smiles filled our faces

and it wasn’t what we spoke about

it was what we knew without a doubt

we walked all night

and until we reached the shore

it was three am or more

and we walked to darkest part

and began to kiss and touch as if we

knew every inch of one another

and we did

and now you are all to me

my best friend

my perfect mate

who can say

only he

and he will

if you believe;

jesus love saves the day!

Copyright © criso

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Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 9/19/2006
Interesting write, as fee says intense too, which goes to show, you never know what is around the corner for your life, i found that out :)
Love Ch'erie
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/22/2006
WOw, I felt intensity, excitement and Wonder in your words Rich! I had to be away for family Health issues, with my mom, it is still going on and I will do what I can! -Amen- I missed reading you and so many, I enjoyed this immensenly and I hope the happiness, love and Trueness in the relationship is still running Strong! Keep on Writing! I love how you share! Love, Light and HuGs, *She*ox
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/25/2006
The love of Jesus Christ will indeed save the day anywhere, anytime.
In line 12 there are some misspellings!

I believe the writer would be better served if the formatting of the construct would adhere more rigidly to formal editing.

The ideas are "real" and executed in a heartfelt way.


Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/21/2006
Thanks for sharing!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/21/2006

Reviewed by Tami Ryan 7/20/2006
I can feel the intensity in this, Ricky. Your work continues to improve. (smiles)

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer 7/20/2006
"Your voice was the soothing noise
I had always needed to hear."
Wonderful Rich! A glorious celebration and union!! Thanks for sharing!
The Sufis say: "Let your ear lead you to your lover" and that is what you did!
Love & joy Suzie :-D
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