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Notes of Pain
Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Friday, July 21, 2006
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Ouch. Feeling it today.
notes of pain; a symphony
of fibromyalgic songs
echoing through the body,
clamoring for attention:
a talent show of sorts, these
duets of muscles and joints
singing in harmony, with
me punctuating the high
parts with screams of misery.
(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.
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|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So sorry to hear you are suffering today. Will keep you in my prayers.|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Karla, this is the best poem I've seen explaining a day in the life of a fibromylgia sufferer. Been there, done that, hated it, got the T-shirt, left the building.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Karla, you have captured the essence of this pain really well! We hope that it will pass soon,
love and hugs, B&R
|Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
|Ouch! this one tells a tale of pain well! sorry you have to be uncomfortable!|
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|I feel your pain literally. I had a friend with fibromyalgia so I know what hell it is. Superb, excellent write. BRAVO!|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|How amazing that your pen so skillfully turns screams of misery into songs of triumph. Beyond the agonies of the body, and even those of the mind, the splendour of your soul clearly rules:-) Thank you for shining the beauty of its light.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|You need to smoke some herb, to some it covers the pain quite well...stay well & keep SMILING...Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Ouch and i can relate, only my pain is from falling down the steps messing up my ankle last sunday Morning, stay strong and keep writing
|Reviewed by Mary Lynn Plaisance
|Well, look at you how pretty!!!!!! I always saw the painting of you and Karen.
I wish you painless days and nights. Well written ((Karla))
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|You definitely write what you feel, Karla, and you make the reader feel it! Good job, my friend. And don't stop.... Stay the strong woman you are....
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
I have a friend with this same pain and there are tomes when I creid for her. You are in my prayers and I will keep you there forever.
Love and peace,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|You made me feel it with this poem! I'm keeping you in prayer and pray you will soon be rid of all the misery! Write on Karla!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hope you feel better soon.....and I know writing about our pain sometimes do the trick just fine!!
Hey now we need a pic of you and Karen in color....would like to see what the difference between you are......lol!!
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Theragesic works wonders................ask Paul Harvey! [it DOES]
FM is rampant, and ravaging, and I acknowledge your personal hell, Karla. You are a strong, strong woman, and an overcomer...I admire you greatly. [and i love your pic!]
I'll step up my prayers for you...Love & ....a tender hug [ouch!]
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|I empathise. Michelle has fibromyalga..
Almost house bound...
|Reviewed by Malcolm Watts (Reader)
|The music in your chronic pain. Wonderful example of lemons into lemonade instead of bitterness. Malcolm Watts|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Oh Karla so sad to hear you are hurting. It is not easy to face and survive a day like that I know as I have had to face in past and will face again in future. Know that are thoughts are with you.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Dear Karla . . .
I pray for your soon release from the grips of this horrid pain.
Richard the Intrepid
|Reviewed by Edwin Larson
|Painful write...hang in there...I hope you feel better|
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Sorry for your pain, my dearest friend
Hope you feel much better
my prayers are with you
love and peace
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I love the analogy between physical pain and a symphony, but I am sorry for your agony. Praying. Stay strong.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Sorry about the pain; wish there was something I could do; I will pray for you!
Love the pic; too cool! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Sad and little bit chilly when reading but sounds of courage and strength of personality echoe from the depths of this poem. In time you will feel better|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Take some anadin...and have a good long steep in a warm lavender bath.
You will feel brand new in time for the DPS Cruise !
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|It hurts just reading this one. And I hope you are feeling much better very soon, Karla - that cruise is coming up, and your show must go on!|