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Damn Tunnel Of Flames”
by Tinka Boukes
Saturday, July 22, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Damn Tunnel Of Flames”


I am HOT beneath my collar
I am lonely and desperate
Wipe out that bloody phony smile jerk
I have a fever to kill
I am just so very tired
 Lonely and HOT
No!!


I don’t want to take any medication
This time


I am dead serious
I am lonely
I feel like


I am dancing

In those damn fires of hell
I cannot bear


This freaking shit no more
I am mad


I am furious

I am losing my mind
I am desperate
Wipe out that damn smile fool
And don’t tell me


To take bloody medication
My mind is drifting
Drifting… in these flames


I am not crazy
But without any answers


And with sad songs in my head
I am in this tunnel of flames
And I am burning… burning… burning
Burning
And I am just so “flippin” tired
I am somebody


 Un noticed
In a damn tunnel of flames!!
Called Marriage!!
I’m Out!!


 

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Reviewed by K. Mulroney 7/25/2006
well now. This could never be accused of not having depth and feeling! toss in a little rambling (which I do myself!)and we have us a poetic rant! I love it!
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader) 7/24/2006
Great, powerful work. You need a long walk in the rain. So do I.

Bob H
Reviewed by Michael Wells 7/24/2006
My prayers are with you, Tinka
I agree with what is being said here
Take your own advice
God bless - Mich
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/23/2006
Powerful write! Hope things are better for you soon.
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 7/23/2006
Crazy without answers is a tough place to be, Tinka!
Time to execute "Plan B."
Peace to you, Poetess!
Carolyn
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 7/23/2006
Sounds like a long walk in the cool rain, is needed here.

Best wishes on cooling off

Peace and happiness
HH

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 7/23/2006
Oh my! I know that's what my butt looks like on the back of the exersize bike! Why don't that make 'exersize skirts' anyway?
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 7/23/2006
Like the dead man said in the President's Analyst, "I'm not paranoid, it's the phone company!" Funny how, when you realize the source of your agony, and get off that train, it all becomes clear.

"I fell in to a burning ring of fire and it burned, burned, burned 'til the flames got higher..." June Carter Cash

Ron
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 7/23/2006
A powerful, emtoinal write, about to break you out of that tunnel.
Love, B&R
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/23/2006
A powerful rant that will hopefully douse at least some of those flames, TinkaSweets. Take care. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by jude forese 7/23/2006
powerful convictions, Tinka ...
Reviewed by Martin Hebert 7/22/2006
~~Tinka~~very powerful poem..well written..take care~~

~~martin~~
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/22/2006
good one
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/22/2006
I am not crazy
But without any answers

I am probably crazy, and, I, too, usually have no answers.

Love that graphic, Tinky.
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 7/22/2006
Tinka, a little estrogen would go a long way to cooling down that fire. Better to have a level head about how you want things than let them consume you. That way you can reason a way out.

Peace,
~ Sara
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/22/2006
Did Paul take this pic of you?
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 7/22/2006
Love Is Always Tunnel Of Hate,i.e. FLAMES...

TRASK
Reviewed by Huda Orfali 7/22/2006
Deep emotions bursting like a volcano
I can feel its heat
Implore you to take your own advice
Thanks for sharing your emotions so honestly
Love and peace
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/22/2006
Tinka ,your setting things aflame with your fiery anger I pray you get out before it all explodes. Saying "I'm Out" and being out, is a whole nother thing. You are Waaaaaaaaaay overdue!All the best to you.

ET
Reviewed by m w 7/22/2006
Some sage self advice that is best followed. You are somebody, somebody special... accept it and act on it.
Reviewed by George Carroll 7/22/2006
I sure hope there is light at the end of that tunnel for you.
Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor 7/22/2006
Tink, I'm not gonna tell ya ta do nuittin, cause I have 6 or, so times already, all I can say, is 1: take hormones if ya need em, if nuttin else, that will make ya crazy, I know! My testosterone is depleted by all the meds I have to take just to wake up each morning, and without the shots once a month, I'm a way bigger goofball than normal
2: It won't get any better, unless he wants to change, ya know that. Its your choice, but it looks like ya gotta make one , real soon. lovya and I am praying for you. Art
Reviewed by Aberjhani 7/22/2006
That was/is one powerful explosion of poetic fury! Felt every bit of it:-)
Aberjhani
Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/22/2006
Tinks

This is hell on earth...
You need to bail out fast..

Love

Peter
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/22/2006
Dear Tinks . . .

The volatility of this construct is overwhelming. I almost began to cry for your current predicament.

All I can say is, make wise decisions that are good for you, and try to keep your energies focused on the brighter tomorrow that release from this hell will bring.

Stand Strong!
Your SoCal bud
Richard the Intrepid
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 7/22/2006
you get out, Tinka, and don't look back! I know what you're talking about...I was married to a misogyinst....please, just go, Tinka!

Susan



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