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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/27/2006 |
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A winner!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
7/27/2006 |
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Most men yearn to feel a woman's power, to try to possess it, to take advantage of it, then in their selfishness, wish that she would relinquish it. A good man learns to cherish it, to respect it, to nurture it and to share it for he knows it will help him grow as well. I feel a very deep message here. profound writing.
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/26/2006 |
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OK ... I had an open vision reading this!
I kept seeing an artist flinging small glassfuls of different colors at a canvas. Afterwards the canvas somehow spoke several languages fluently and then moved upon the throngs with a rare eloquence.
Go figure ...
This was intriguing ... it is like a vision that speaks of levels of awareness and communiction that transcend the corporeal.
Very good construct dear Susan!
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/26/2006 |
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Rosbreys do that to me, too.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/26/2006 |
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lucious, delightful passion in tasty verse...whew. Who needs the heat wave when I can read poetry like this? Scorching!! LOL But excellently penned. Well done, Susan!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/26/2006 |
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| Wozer! Hey Sis, it's hot enough in this heat wave we're in! Will read this again tonight;-) What a terrific tasty teasing treat this is!You go girl! |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/26/2006 |
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| ShaZAM!!! Pass the Kryptanite! (I know "ShaZAM" is Captian Marvel, but . . . It just seemed to work. Dynamite poetry. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/26/2006 |
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| This kind of heat I can relate to and look forward to. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
7/26/2006 |
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Susan
You light up the Den today with this searing offering..
As if it wasn't sizzling enough outside !
A Golden Oldie
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
7/26/2006 |
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Wow! Your words should be fire insurance ! ! !
And, just WHAT is an, "oldie?"
Let's not go there! Your work keeps me young enough ! ! !
- Bill
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/26/2006 |
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falling down on bended knee
he bows his head to worship thee
to taste to, savour ambrosia sweet
his table her on satin sheet
Great write Susan and sorry I just had to add the above in the spirit of the moment as my passion built.
Hugs,
Fee
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