12 Naked Ladies
by Connie Hinnen Cook
Thursday, July 27, 2006
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What a wonderful discovery!
what a marvelous surprise!
there they were ~ 12 Naked Ladies
dancing right before my eyes!
Found them hiding in the Iris,
long green blades gave them their skirts,
each one bolder than the next one,
they were shameless, carefree flirts!
I had planted them one August
with no fanfare and no fuss,
they were hidden from our neighbors,
no one saw them except us.
Standing tall there by the forest,
each one's face, her one reward,
they lived solely for our pleasure,
just for us and for the Lord.
Like a vacant lot of wild flowers
overgrown with weed and thorn,
they were blooming without notice
till they caught my eye this morn.
Hummingbirds will tell you different,
bumblebees will disagree,
but when God made Naked Ladies
He was thinking about me!
'Cause although they look exotic
they still flourish without care,
what delight to see their faces,
Naked Ladies, hiding there.
~ Connie ~
"The secret things
belong unto the LORD our God..."
(Deuteronomy 29:29a, KJV)
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|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|A prize to have discover this breath of fresh air Connie. Much enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Great find and write...
Stay c0ol Connie.......
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautiful, I have a half dozen each Christmas blooming.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Not the naked ladies that immediately came to mind upon reading the title, Connie *Lord, forgive me LOL*, but captivating beauty instead. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Victor Dean (Reader)
|This is just great, what marvelous thought process.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|They are just beautiful and I know how you must have felt when you discovered them. Sometimes Connie we can be overwhelmed by Creator's surprises;-)Splendid poem!|
|Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
|Connie, When I read the title, I gotta admit, I blushed and didn't know if I really wanted to look at 12 naked bods! Nice poem, nice flowers, too,...the element of surprise was great! :)
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|When I read the title had to check it out, how cruel, lol. Great write blended with humour my friend.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|oh, Connie, this is such a fun and carefree poem! it brightened my day...thank you!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|One is not amused....lol|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
An essentially beautiful and decorative poem..
Yep...God has so many wonders and secrets in our world !
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Gotta love those nekkid ladies, I know I always have . . .|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Your melody is perfection.......love this poem
my highest compliment to you
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|And beautiful are they indeed. Wonderful shot, you captured the essence of God's beauty on earth.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|They sound like very lovely Naked Ladies, Connie!|