|Reviewed by F William Broome
|Right down my alley.... if I had an alley, that is. You are far less dark in your work than I had thought.. "Tis good writing in this one. And, at your tender but knowing age ! ! !
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Ah, the pain of heartbreak; really helps remind one of the value of moving on! Well done, Maria.
|Reviewed by ronald genise
|You can never win when you try to be what you are not|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|I know that when we linger on ewhat could have been then we tend to make things in the past look better than they actually were. It's time to fly away from those things and put them where they belong. Excellent reflective pen Mariah.
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Deeply moving but at the same time sad that you should have to be another person in order to find his love, perhaps it is time to let someone love the real you. Effective and emotional write Mariah, well done.
|Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
|This world is filled with sadness as well as joy and everything in between. It's so sad that we have to believe that we are nothing without someone else and that the way we look is all important but that is how the world sees us. So sad to me because this is not how I believe. excellent write. Pierre.|