|Reviewed by Amira van Kerk
|As long as there is still a flame, there is hope.
Powerful and sad write.
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|this poem is perfect in rhyme, reason and presentation, like I said...you are so good!|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes we just have the accept when the flame cannot be rekindled or even if it existed at all ... if anyone should deny your right to aspire they are not worth the effort ...|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|A strong poem, the emotions in a troubled, if not dying relationship expressed well.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful offering Eileen!!
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Such a sad theme that expresses deep, honest yearning so poignantly. Don't know why but the song "It takes two baby" leapt into my head when I read this. Passionate desires expertly written here Eileen. Love Panda :)|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent points here, Eileen; good stuff!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Des Warde (Reader)
|the love of man and wife is a two-way stream...
how stark and true! nice piece...like your repetitive touch
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Doesn't get much plainer than this.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Loves desire must be rekindled or it turns to ash.|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Deep. God bless you queen.
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|An intensely womanist write burning with a woman's sexual prerogatives and poet's passionate articulation. Sweet:-)
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|a very powerful write......that I hope he hears.|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Being so jealous is vain...
Powerful, and to the point Eileen...
|Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor
|WOW! I guarantee I would have an answer for ya. Good poem, rocks with get with it. Hope he does. Rock|