Jean Paul's Yellow Helicopter
by Kenny J Baez
Thursday, August 03, 2006
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JEAN PAULíS YELLOW HELICOPTER
John Paul wants a kiss
from every pretty nurse.
He is a Beatles fan
and want the Red album:
Can you help me, please?
I've pushed him around Southport
and now my legs are tired,
but we have the album, we have a copy!
I like Yellow Submarine, John Paul.
He has his own version.
Itís called Yellow Helicopter:
We all live in a yellow helicopter,
a yellow helicopter, a yellow helicopter ...
and we're flying over Penny Lane, love,
over Strawberry Fields and the Albert Dock.
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|YEllow being myh favorite color always, this one caught my eye. I loved to have a yellow car if I can afford one after this one. Do so like sunshiney yellow and the beatles too and England too. Have a pen pal in Daventry Eng.|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|... too damn right... especially with you pushing him around! You soar when you get inside the lives and minds of your charges, Ken. You bestow grace, beauty and value on each character you portray and, like a gardener (I wonder why??!!) you lovingly tend in words the precious blooms and seedlings whilst rooting around in the muck and the soil of life. You make poetry seem so easy with your words... but it is not so much in your articulation (which is seamless) but in your poetic eye and appreciative and perspicacious heart. Always gleaming, your joie de vivre is infectious... Where the hell are you?! Have you got my latest texts?!!!!!! LOL Lady Madonna xx|
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Love the 'Beetles' references here.|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|You, Andy and pretty nurses with the beloved Beatles playing in the background....sounds like a man's dream to me. I can here "We all live in a yellow submarine...yellow sigmarine...yellow submarine...."
It's a perfect poem when one hears accompanied music merely by suggestion.
Excellent Kenny...my man!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Great Idea about the pretty nurses, I'll tag along...|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I really like the Yellow Submarine, and this Yellow Helicopter sounds most intriguing, too!|