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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
8/8/2006 |
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This is excellent Fee, you are right on m8.
Hugs
Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
8/6/2006 |
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| Reminds me of a painting I once saw called 'The Persistence of Memory' by Salvador Dali. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
8/4/2006 |
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More precious than water, our time...most excellent, Fee!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
8/4/2006 |
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| The most easily wasted and yet to be prized most highly. Sadly, we tend to use and abuse it as if, like life itself, it were in endless supply, but the truth is, I think, that time travels on a stright line from beginning to end and not in circles, round and round. We would do well to take stock and appreciate just how far along this line we may have travelled... both as individuals and corporately. The face of a clock stares in some shape or form ALWAYS into ours at every twist and turn... it's silence belies it's utmost importance as it gestures its hands in helpless appeal... Guaranteed to bring the most poignant out of each of us, this write hits home and resonates against nerves at the core of our deepest being. Great write, Felix! Bang on time! LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
8/3/2006 |
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| Most wonderful thoughts displayed herein on the most valuable comodity on earth Felix...enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/3/2006 |
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| time is fleeting but we are conjoined to its pulse ... have to say, this is a timely write ... |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
8/3/2006 |
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Time is a factor in the past, present and future. We lose it, live it and approach it...always. It is where we put values ...if we're wise. Is it time? It's approaching but is it too late?
Time...fluctuates and we are our own pawns. You are a wise man Fee...very wise in your thoughts, focus and values.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
8/3/2006 |
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This is timed to perfection Felix, though I fear time is running out for all of us earlier than expected.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
8/3/2006 |
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| The person who has just been told they have 6 months to live sees an eternity pass in that time. |
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| Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher |
8/3/2006 |
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A beautiful timeless write about the precious time we so often take for granted.
Love, B&R |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
8/3/2006 |
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| Contemplated much on this one Fee. Exceedingly pertinent words ...someone once said to me people abuse time because it is always there, they take it for granted and are then left wishing for more. Acknowledge its existence and then it can be used wisely. I think your poem encapsulates that perfectly. Lovely work. Love Panda :) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
8/3/2006 |
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Well done ...now it's time to explain...lol!!
Sorry for not reading you guys out there...been without power for two days now...falling trees and heavy rains are the main problem....we are flooding awayyyy...okay!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
8/3/2006 |
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| Very abstract and VERY good! |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
8/3/2006 |
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Felix
The Passage of Time is excellently described in this fine poem..
I always think it is best to stay one step ahead of Time...:)
Peter |
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