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tick tock - tick tock
by Felix LeRoy Perry
Thursday, August 03, 2006
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Muse guided...


tick tock


tick tock


tick tock


 


Time


bares the seconds of our lives as on we plod


bares the minutes of our sins in a false facade


bares the hours of our transgressions to God


 


Time


waits gives no extra seconds to no man to spare


waits an angry minute for the end of all that is not there


waits diluted hours as Armageddon cries out in despair


 


Time


in mere seconds steals the youth from your soul


in minutes dark  deters you from your goal


in hours bleak  digs you deeper a bottomless hole


 


tick tock


hear it talk


better heed


ticking clock


 



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Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 8/8/2006
This is excellent Fee, you are right on m8.
Hugs
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 8/6/2006
Reminds me of a painting I once saw called 'The Persistence of Memory' by Salvador Dali.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/4/2006
More precious than water, our time...most excellent, Fee!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 8/4/2006
The most easily wasted and yet to be prized most highly. Sadly, we tend to use and abuse it as if, like life itself, it were in endless supply, but the truth is, I think, that time travels on a stright line from beginning to end and not in circles, round and round. We would do well to take stock and appreciate just how far along this line we may have travelled... both as individuals and corporately. The face of a clock stares in some shape or form ALWAYS into ours at every twist and turn... it's silence belies it's utmost importance as it gestures its hands in helpless appeal... Guaranteed to bring the most poignant out of each of us, this write hits home and resonates against nerves at the core of our deepest being. Great write, Felix! Bang on time! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 8/3/2006
Most wonderful thoughts displayed herein on the most valuable comodity on earth Felix...enjoyed
Reviewed by jude forese 8/3/2006
time is fleeting but we are conjoined to its pulse ... have to say, this is a timely write ...
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 8/3/2006
Time is a factor in the past, present and future. We lose it, live it and approach it...always. It is where we put values ...if we're wise. Is it time? It's approaching but is it too late?

Time...fluctuates and we are our own pawns. You are a wise man Fee...very wise in your thoughts, focus and values.

Love,

Susan
Reviewed by Paul Williams 8/3/2006
This is timed to perfection Felix, though I fear time is running out for all of us earlier than expected.

Paul;-)
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/3/2006
The person who has just been told they have 6 months to live sees an eternity pass in that time.
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 8/3/2006
A beautiful timeless write about the precious time we so often take for granted.
Love, B&R
Reviewed by Miss Pandora 8/3/2006
Contemplated much on this one Fee. Exceedingly pertinent words ...someone once said to me people abuse time because it is always there, they take it for granted and are then left wishing for more. Acknowledge its existence and then it can be used wisely. I think your poem encapsulates that perfectly. Lovely work. Love Panda :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 8/3/2006
Well done ...now it's time to explain...lol!!

Sorry for not reading you guys out there...been without power for two days now...falling trees and heavy rains are the main problem....we are flooding awayyyy...okay!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 8/3/2006
Very abstract and VERY good!
Reviewed by Peter Paton 8/3/2006
Felix

The Passage of Time is excellently described in this fine poem..
I always think it is best to stay one step ahead of Time...:)

Peter
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