|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Aloneness is not nice , but your writing explains some of it and why Liked this poem. good.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
Some of us are still searching for love
and our soul mate
actually I'm not searching anymore..now I know he is within me..thus even when I die I won't be doing it alone..see the difference?
insightful write Dale..good job!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This may be a bit sad but it is a philosophical truth about our life here. Thank you, Dale. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Martin Hebert
|~~Dale~great poem..words hit home~~
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Bittersweet understanding here, Dale. Penned with such sensitivity, grace... and with a sense of gratitude and contentment - a sense of oneness and harmony - with all that life has already bestowed. But yet that nagging little gap somewhere, the need to share when we don't even know WHAT it is we want to.. the need to be heard and understood without even breathing a word? Sharing just the sense of moment and being?! Can relate to every syllable of this comprehensive poem and appreciate it both on a human and spiritual level. Even when sorrounded by the crowd, by friends and family, we can still feel that aloneness. But having an awareness of the overarching presence of God means that both in life and death, I need never fear being alone. I personally enjoy "aloneness" but have never suffered loneliness... until that little concept of "soul mate" rears its head... Much to ponder here, Dale. A laid-bare and tender write, thank you. LOL Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Ir S
|Nice poem, but we are not alone, invite the Lord into your heart and see how happy you will be.|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Well Dale. I don't know about you, but there were a lot of people in the hospital room when I was born. ROFL. Dying alone...now that is something else again.
Love it, though made me blue.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|sometimes, no matter how long we search or how far we go, our love still goes answered ... but even if it did, we'd still die alone ...
excellent poem, Dale ...
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A philosophically poignant and emotionally powerful meditation on this journey we call life. Sobering and beautiful at the same time.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Have to ditto Ed on this......life goes by too damn fast!!
Take care dear poet!!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Our youth is fleeting
and age takes its place
Life truly does passes us by much too quickly - I best get out there and do something today, while I still can.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah, how deeply poignant this is Dale, and so true, just got to me today, excellently expressed,