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A Veiled Attempt
by Susan K. de Vegter
Wednesday, August 09, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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And when nights dreams are finished
When sun comes breaking through
My lips will still be famished
For a loving taste of you
When dreaming time has passed it's prime
When sunlight hides it's goal
I raise my head from lonely bed
Reach for my kindred soul
Then with a smile he will return
In veiled attempt to shadow
The morning light that fades the night
As if nothing else much matters
I lie in comfort , earth bound...
As thoughts of midnight fly
Then he'll return to ease that burn
Then kiss awake my eyes .

Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2006

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Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Sometimes dreams are a wonderful release from the pain and heartache of life. And dreams can be so hopeful. beautiful. Pierre.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
A knight to end night and rescue day.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Thank you for sharing these lovely and loving sentiments, Susan. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

The pic carries me back to the bayou...oh, this is gorgeous. And the passions expressed in beautiful verse just enhance the magic of dreamtime...sigh. Yes. Lovely, lovely poetry. BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Streamers of moss and a blanket of fog seduces A Veiled Attempt in a sensuous sleepy-eye you really want him to kiss your eyes awake...perhaps the dream should prevail, Susan...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
How beautiful.... you romantic you!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by richard cederberg
This is a sumptuous piece Susan.

The rhythm and flow draws the reader along like a gentle stream. And when you step out of the stream you feel as if you're covered in gold dust.

You are the Southern Belle extraordinaire!

In admiration ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Peter Paton

I concur with the consensus of opinion below..
I can neither add or subtract from all that they say !
The graphic is stupendous

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
A lovely poem and a most intriguing picture, Susan.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Oh my, how beautifully romantic, this is exquisite poetry, absolutely lovely,

Reviewed by jude forese
a beautiful and uplifting romantic poem, Susan ...
Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Susan, this write is resplendent in its passages. It reminded me of the first verse of The Song of Solomon; 'Let him kiss me with the kisses of his mouth - For your love is better than wine.'

The accompanying photograph is equally lovely.

Blessings, Rhonda
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Love the romance in this. Enjoyed the photo too!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
My, my, my, how you talk you southern sweet soul you. This is a poem that just reeks sensuousness and you do the southern version it better than anyone.
Reviewed by George Carroll
You do these poems so well and that pic looks like it is out of the rain forest.
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
Oh Susan, this is beyond WOW...just dreamy, luscious poetry at it's very finest...worth many, many reads and saving with my most treasured ones. Where ever did you find tht incredible picture? I know it has to be Savannah/Tybee...but it takes me to the marshes of Glynn nearby and all the history that I love about St. Simon's Island....a place I used to visit yearly as a child and an adult and read in native Eugenia Price's historical fiction novels. It sets the tone for passion, mystery, and utter romance. Your poem is the plu-perfect compliment!
Reviewed by ronald genise
am amazed how you can transfer words into passion

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Susan exquisite poetry! I always melt into your love poems. They are so in tune with the emotions. Just read your last one;-) Eileen
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Beautiful work as always, Susan.

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