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Tears
by Leandra H V

Wednesday, June 05, 2002

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Every thing was good
every thing was O.K.
So why the hell...
did you have to go away?

My life was on track
everything was perfect
I finally got away
from the fear i had surefaced

But it seems as though
I'v come astray
and these tears of mine
won't go away....

How could you do this?
leave me all alone...
I didnt even notice
you'r not the person i'd once known

I can't get over you
i cry my many tears
theres nuthing left to do
but run away from my peers

I don't give my trust
don't think i ever will
thinking of you is a must...
and my heart will never heal...



shitty poem
cant stop thinking of him though

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Reviewed by Lori Moore 6/6/2002
Excellent poem.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 6/5/2002
No. It is not a shitty poem, Leandra. Yes, it can be polished when you feel good enough to reflect on these temporary setbacks. Your content and writing skills are well ahead of a lot of others and it has to be because you love to write.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 6/5/2002
No, Leandra..it's a good poem....creative...
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