|Reviewed by A PAX
|deep and beautiful, no matter if it could be.......
what matters is the inspiration
and how it is felt
and you have so gracefully expressed it
as always your poetry is amazing, delicate, and inspiring
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Powerful, poignantly verse emotion, Jill, very well told! Glad it's fictional. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Beautiful but so sad; very well penned, Jill; thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love from Burleson, your fellow Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Lew Duffey
|A Beautiful heart breaker.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|As always you enchant with you wonderful meter and rhyme style and bring the love within you out in print.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Jill, whoever this fictional character may or may not be, he would be a very lucky man to inspire such a write as this. It doesn't happen to often in this life but when it does and I have felt this myself instant connections like that are sooooo deep and can be sooo painful because all you are left with is the curiosity of what if...
You captured those feeling well,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Wonderful sentiments well-expressed!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)