Reclining in Pink
by Jane Rodway
Tuesday, September 05, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Based on the painting of the same name by Burton Silverman, 1998, Oil on Canvas
Ink spot mane
iced and chilled.
Ink spot eyes
yet belly full,
Hears her song,
Sings her tune,
these restless nights,
these subtle dreams.
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|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Tou trace her loveliness and read her mind...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|It is wonderful how you can transpose a painting into words through your inspiration, Michelle. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
In a word, Lovely.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Lovely write, Michelle; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Glad I dropped by, this is really lovely work. Panda :)|
|Reviewed by J M
|I also found your play of ords beautiful in this piece so visiual wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Beautiful word play here inspired by the tantalizing picture shown.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|She is very tiny....
But you words make up for the minimalism....
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|Wow..This was beautiful!!!
Love & Light, Dove
|Reviewed by A PAX
|This poem makes me feel cuddled
I really like it......
its mysterious too
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Pink is restored in parts of the old pattern. I love the lines "ink spot mane and ink spot eyes." Reclining in Pink gives us clues on how we might restore a meaningful piece of art of our grandest soft pink heritage. I keep an old-time rose scent jar and occasionally restore the scent with dried rose petals, ginger, cinnamon, allspice, rose oil and glycerin packed in an old-time jar with a wire-stopper lid. Your poem Reclining in Pink goes well with the scent, Michelle...