|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Sizzles . . . you have rocked the poetic house once again!
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Nahhhh- You don't NEED Micky- You need your shower hose.... lol
Go cool off Tink-- Great Poem! sounds like a journal entry... Warm HuGs! *She*
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Hot collab! Thanks for sharing you two. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Your talent shines, Tinka.|
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Another perfectly penned masterpiece!|
|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Great prose, Tinka.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|As always Tinka I enjoy
your wonderful postings
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
|Tinka, maybe the HEAT of your Mickey-passion made you delirious, and you had a pizza reverie!
Wonderful Tinky & Mickey Fare..
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|It is ok to have just one slice, Tinka. Life is too short for hard-line diet rules. The pizza cheat will give you a reason to take a long and beautiful walk along the sand the next day, breathe in the salt air, so you win twice.
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Too bad that old hunger monster interrupted this heartfelt reverie!
It was so dreamy and moody, then a complete reversal as it changed into a humorous write about pizza and perseverance.
Fun to read.
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Sissy Tinks ...
I felt as if I was reading your diary here. You bring us into your thoughts, and cravings, and fears, and wants, and insecurities, quite effectively. A very good write!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Fun fun fun....|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Well I give you kudo's for resisting the pizza, and nudges for making changes;-) Lovely poem Tinks!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Hot is a different diet when love's hunger's is passion. What a thirst quencher Tinka!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|September is still summer but it is grape season and it's sultry. Oh well, I'll indulge in a pizza instead of you. Still diet or no diet, if you do your own it could be less fattening. Besides if you managed to resist then you deserve a prize. Go and buy one as a reward. Love Victor|
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|Tinky & Micky, HOW CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Eternal Love, Dove
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|ONe slice of pizza won't kill ya or your diet...eat in moderation, if you are used to 4 pieces, eat two, if you are used to two sandwhiches, eat one...that is the key to slowly losing weight...ED|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|Enjoyed this whimsical flow of need and desire that illustrates so well the little messages our bodies send to make us think our stomachs crave one thing when it's really our hearts desiring something altogether different:-)
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Good collab, Mickey and Tinka; very well done! BRAVO~! BRAVA~!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|An excellent collaboration, Tinka and Mickey; well done! Here, in Texas, it's finally cooled down to the upper 80s, low 90s. MUCH better than the extended triple digit days we had...
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Sending cooling refreshing prayers your way. :)
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
A wonderful and romantic collaboration by you and Micky..
I am certain that you will see your glorious day and union..
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite a hot summer's day - and quite a poem, Tinky.
But go ahead, have a piece of pizza - it's good for the soul!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Sounds like a diary entry..........
today I........blank blank blank
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Yearnings and longings permeate this soulful write.|