|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|And those stones send back an echo, fozen in their emptiness. Sad metaphor CJ and so well written.
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|"they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond" Now THAT is a descriptive verse!! Keep em coming!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|So vivid. Excellently expressed..|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A soul-reaching creation, CJ. Most compelling. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Sadly beautiful offering...sometimes we give too much..and then we close up...when hurt so deeply it crush the soul!!!!
|Reviewed by A PAX
|So visual, sad.........yet.....I see a determination, more than a resignation to this poem
and with each new ring,
more feelings fade
spreading wider, chilling deeper,
til cold as ice,
they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond
Timing is everything :)
|Reviewed by Brett Moore
|What a great poem. The imagery of a rippling effect of coldness is so real.|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|Wow... this made me tear up. I just broke up with my fiance and this hit hard! Awesome and beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Sad but beautiful in construction. Great imagery. We have to be careful to whom we offer our hearts. Victor|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
This reminded me greatly of my own poem " Cold Cold Heart "...and also one of my Beloved Mum's sayings to me..." Cold Hands....Warm Heart, Son..."..
Love and Hugs
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Powerful poem that stirs the senses. Cold hearts are intriguing. One wonders how they got that way, and you show some reasons...sad...Superb poem, CJ!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow...intense and breathtaking though very sadly touching.