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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
11/24/2006 |
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And those stones send back an echo, fozen in their emptiness. Sad metaphor CJ and so well written.
Ripply Hugs |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
9/22/2006 |
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"they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond" Now THAT is a descriptive verse!! Keep em coming!
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/21/2006 |
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| So vivid. Excellently expressed.. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/21/2006 |
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A soul-reaching creation, CJ. Most compelling. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/21/2006 |
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Sadly beautiful offering...sometimes we give too much..and then we close up...when hurt so deeply it crush the soul!!!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
9/21/2006 |
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So visual, sad.........yet.....I see a determination, more than a resignation to this poem
and with each new ring,
more feelings fade
spreading wider, chilling deeper,
til cold as ice,
they become as stones
bouncing on a frozen pond
Timing is everything :)
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Brett Moore |
9/20/2006 |
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| What a great poem. The imagery of a rippling effect of coldness is so real. |
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| Reviewed by Brittany Renée |
9/20/2006 |
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| Wow... this made me tear up. I just broke up with my fiance and this hit hard! Awesome and beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
9/20/2006 |
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| Sad but beautiful in construction. Great imagery. We have to be careful to whom we offer our hearts. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/20/2006 |
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CJ
This reminded me greatly of my own poem " Cold Cold Heart "...and also one of my Beloved Mum's sayings to me..." Cold Hands....Warm Heart, Son..."..
Love and Hugs
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/20/2006 |
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Powerful poem that stirs the senses. Cold hearts are intriguing. One wonders how they got that way, and you show some reasons...sad...Superb poem, CJ!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/20/2006 |
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Wow...intense and breathtaking though very sadly touching.
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