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SAD POEM
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
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Poem is fiction. I'm not sad. Hope all are well here at AD.





Bored with the sun
out with the fun

Let the rain pour down
all that matters is a frown

Head is under a cover
happiness; can not discover

Done with pulling hair out
somewhere there; may care

No interest anymore
another lock is put on the door.


9/23/06
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Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Frowns and smiles, one is down and the other is up. I choose "up".
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
I can relate, Ron. Love and peace,

Regis
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Sounds like the emotions one might run into while leaving in a city. The cure of course is nature :-) Glad to read that this is only writing :-) Great capture of this emotion.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
That is sad indeed, Ron. But very well illustrated in graphic and words. BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

I love your cute sketch.If I were talented enough
to sketch you I would do a rainbow with my coloured pencils
and although there would be blue there too,I would mainly
use bright sunny yellow as your work always brightens up
anyone's day.
Hug for one of my favourite Northern Hemisphere writers/artists.
From
Your fan and pal
Kay.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Good write, but a bit sad! I hope you are okay; you are in my prayers, Sketchman! Take care!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Hey dude, good to read you again.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by jude forese
hey, Ron ... next write a happy poem ...
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Hey Ron, I almost missed this poem. Glad to see you around. I'm proud to display your drawning of me in my den. Victor
Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
Sure glad you put that disclaimer at the top, Ron. Woulda been funny to have had to come up there, knock the door down, and pull you outa there! So, let the rains come, 'cause the sun'll come out tomorrow...LOL

Micke
HEY! Glad you see you revived!
Reviewed by Linda Hill
Wow...awesome write Ron.
You have captured depression through your pen.
Excellent!
So glad it's fiction...

Your friend, Linda
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Yet there are those who run from life...
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Ron,
I don't know anybody that can bring a smile to one's face quicker than you!
I believe it's the saying goodbye to another season of the year and life, that saddens us so often, but as the new comes in, we'll (as always) begin to do our search and rescue and recover to enjoy it as well.
Seeing and reading you Ron is always a grand pleasure.

Lisa
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta
I think it is the change of season. It gets me down too. But you are sketching it out, and that makes me think you are okay, just expressing an emotion that can very well change just that fast. Good for us you are here. :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I did not know my sad wings could be wrapped around anothers quill??

You did it is style and the picture made me smile....sad or not you always bring a smile across!!

Love Tinky-Pooh
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
And so returns the brilliance of RON...welcome back. HUGS, CUZZ
Reviewed by George Carroll
You describe despair so well, I'm happy it is only fiction. Glad to see you posting and how I've missed your humorous sketches.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Another lock, less fun, pulling your hair out...? Have you moved to NJ and didn't let the rest of us know...? LOL! Ed
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Sounds like a sign of the times Ron! Love the art! Hope you really are okay, you are missed! smoooooooooooooch!;-)

Lots of love
Eileen
Reviewed by Sherry Heim
We do it to ourselves when we dwell on the difficulties in life instead of counting our blessings. Life is for learning and the simple stuff is not what gives us character, it is spitting in the eye of adversity and living well. Great poem, Ron!!
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hi Ron:

You are always cheerful. I've never known you to be sad. I'm glad to know that this is only fictional.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
been there, done that...I feel the exhaustion in this verse

Susan
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
it is sad
Reviewed by J M
I think it is sad too and the rhyme is excellent did you do this sketch it is wonderful expressive.
Joselyn
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