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A new Day Beloved
by Kalil T Anderson
Sunday, September 24, 2006
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Just sometin on my mind

Itz a new day Beloved
Do you see the sun
blood has been shed
has our battle been
won

itz a new Day Beloved
and kids play all
threw the streets
threres food in
every cupboard
for everyone to
eat

Itz a new Day beloved
i knew that things
would change
no more our people
suffer
no guns, violence, gangs

its a new day beloved did
i make you proud freedom
is ringing and the sun is
beyond that cloud

its a new day beloved
but nothings wut it
seems im woken by a gunshot
beloved it was just a dream  



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Reviewed by Jane Rodway
WOW, so powerful, excellent-can I suggest that in the 5th stanza, you start the third line with freedom-it blends a bit with the previous line-this should be published, people need to read writing like this that means something.
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Peace is and will always remain a dream to pray and reach for.
Grand poetry and Welcome to AD.

Lisa
Reviewed by A PAX
Very interesting
the optisim is encouraging, the ending a heart break
A tale well told...Welcome to Authors Den

pax A
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Dreams can be deceptive. Great imagery. Victor
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