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A new Day Beloved by Kalil T Anderson Sunday, September 24, 2006 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan Just sometin on my mind
Itz a new day Beloved Do you see the sun blood has been shed has our battle been won itz a new Day Beloved and kids play all threw the streets threres food in every cupboard for everyone to eat Itz a new Day beloved i knew that things would change no more our people suffer no guns, violence, gangs its a new day beloved did i make you proud freedom is ringing and the sun is beyond that cloud its a new day beloved but nothings wut it seems im woken by a gunshot beloved it was just a dream �

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Reviewed by Jane Rodway	9/24/2006

WOW, so powerful, excellent-can I suggest that in the 5th stanza, you start the third line with freedom-it blends a bit with the previous line-this should be published, people need to read writing like this that means something.




Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers	9/24/2006

Peace is and will always remain a dream to pray and reach for. Grand poetry and Welcome to AD. Lisa




Reviewed by A PAX	9/24/2006

Very interesting the optisim is encouraging, the ending a heart break A tale well told...Welcome to Authors Den pax A




Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)	9/24/2006

Dreams can be deceptive. Great imagery. Victor