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A Cruel Wake Up Call
by Felix LeRoy Perry

Monday, September 25, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Fiction only.

A golden ring sits on the stand


The stand beside their bed


A picture is on the dresser


Captured words they once said


A closet door still partly open


Echoes the lonely emptiness inside


Damp tissues in the wastebasket


Just captured tears once cried


Pillow still fluffed, un-dented


Forlorn in morning light


Lingering smell of perfume


Memories of that final fight!


 


 


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Reviewed by Southern Comfort 6/24/2008
Hey Santa! I adore your soul transference poetry! Man, Ya can really write! Smooches SC
Reviewed by K. Mulroney 9/30/2006
wow..the ending threw me. this is very good!!
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 9/26/2006
This can really wake someone up in a hurry. Those final words, final looks, and the the tears. It is so sad when two people who fellin love, have to fall out of it.

I could feel the emotion in this piece Felix, I could "see" the empty closet through the door half open. I "saw" the ring on the dresser and "smelled" the odor of drifitng perfume. I "saw" the pillow that had not been slept on, and the tissues in the wastebasket.

This is a great piece Felix, because the imagery, teh plot, and the emotion are all true to life. And, true IN life too. Thank you for sharing this.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you lvoe, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peae on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFULSISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by Chris & G. Reed 9/25/2006
That is really amazing, i love the perfect flow of the entire poem.
Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett 9/25/2006
Once again it is always a pleasure to be able to read such fine work written from an artist as yourself.
Reviewed by Linda Hill 9/25/2006
Awesome write, my friend.
I could feel the emptiness and heartbreak in this write.
So glad it's fiction!

~Linda
Reviewed by Micha Julian 9/25/2006
how all too honest, fiction though it is, you've so captured this sad and lonely scene with a passion and a beauty all your own, what an insightful, excellence, here, dear Felix and glad for you it is, indeed, fiction!
Hugs,
m.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/25/2006
Fiction or no fiction I could feel the friction!!

Well written Felix!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 9/25/2006
I'm glad it's only fiction too... those lingering images can surely haunt.

Myrna
Reviewed by Joyce Hale 9/25/2006
Felix, this is sad, beautiful.... an excellent write!!

Peace. Joyce
Reviewed by Peter Paton 9/25/2006
Fee

This is a tragic and realistic piece of in your face fiction..
Palpable

Peter
Reviewed by CJ Heck 9/25/2006
Oh Fee, I have goosebumps all up and down my arms -- this is so tragic. This is a well-written account of such a sad event (and I do pray that it is fiction).
Many hugs,
Your friend,
CJ
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/25/2006
Fee,

Cruel, indeed....glad it's only fiction. :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 9/25/2006
I'm glad its only fiction, but good ficttion nonetheless.

Elizabeth
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 9/25/2006
Felix, this is wonderful written, it deeply touches each corner of the heart, rocks our emotions. Brilliant.
Love and Peace,
B&R
Reviewed by jude forese 9/25/2006
an vivid emotional capture, Felix ...
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 9/25/2006
Felix, this is perfection. You captured the feeling and setting with acuity! Perfection, Felix!

Susan
Reviewed by Miss Pandora 9/25/2006
Fee, this is haunting and powerfully sad but brilliant. You capture superbly that feeling of sorrow when no more embers glow. Love Panda :)
Reviewed by J M 9/25/2006
For me Felix this is not fiction and you capture the departure time of this last fight emotionaly..... Well done FEE!!!!!!

Blessings, Joselyn
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 9/25/2006
I hope this was a nightmare you had!
Profound in it's entirety.
Love Ch'erie
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 9/25/2006
How sad. That two grown ups cannot iron out their differences through dialogue. But the real reason is loss of love. And once lost, this picture leaps up. Great poem. Victor
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/25/2006
Too sad....

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 9/25/2006
life is cruel when we are selfish, or jealous or hysr don't make the grade in another's eyes. It's worse when there is no conditioning. This is sad all the way down to the abyss where we collect those hurting memories.
love and peace,
susan
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