|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|Hey Santa! I adore your soul transference poetry! Man, Ya can really write! Smooches SC|
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|wow..the ending threw me. this is very good!!|
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This can really wake someone up in a hurry. Those final words, final looks, and the the tears. It is so sad when two people who fellin love, have to fall out of it.
I could feel the emotion in this piece Felix, I could "see" the empty closet through the door half open. I "saw" the ring on the dresser and "smelled" the odor of drifitng perfume. I "saw" the pillow that had not been slept on, and the tissues in the wastebasket.
This is a great piece Felix, because the imagery, teh plot, and the emotion are all true to life. And, true IN life too. Thank you for sharing this.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you lvoe, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peae on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFULSISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Chris & G. Reed
|That is really amazing, i love the perfect flow of the entire poem.|
|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|Once again it is always a pleasure to be able to read such fine work written from an artist as yourself.|
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Awesome write, my friend.
I could feel the emptiness and heartbreak in this write.
So glad it's fiction!
|Reviewed by Micha Julian
|how all too honest, fiction though it is, you've so captured this sad and lonely scene with a passion and a beauty all your own, what an insightful, excellence, here, dear Felix and glad for you it is, indeed, fiction!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Fiction or no fiction I could feel the friction!!
Well written Felix!!
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I'm glad it's only fiction too... those lingering images can surely haunt.
|Reviewed by Joyce Hale
|Felix, this is sad, beautiful.... an excellent write!!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
This is a tragic and realistic piece of in your face fiction..
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Oh Fee, I have goosebumps all up and down my arms -- this is so tragic. This is a well-written account of such a sad event (and I do pray that it is fiction).
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Cruel, indeed....glad it's only fiction. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|I'm glad its only fiction, but good ficttion nonetheless.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|Felix, this is wonderful written, it deeply touches each corner of the heart, rocks our emotions. Brilliant.
Love and Peace,
|Reviewed by jude forese
|an vivid emotional capture, Felix ...|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|Felix, this is perfection. You captured the feeling and setting with acuity! Perfection, Felix!
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Fee, this is haunting and powerfully sad but brilliant. You capture superbly that feeling of sorrow when no more embers glow. Love Panda :)|
|Reviewed by J M
|For me Felix this is not fiction and you capture the departure time of this last fight emotionaly..... Well done FEE!!!!!!
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|I hope this was a nightmare you had!
Profound in it's entirety.
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|How sad. That two grown ups cannot iron out their differences through dialogue. But the real reason is loss of love. And once lost, this picture leaps up. Great poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|life is cruel when we are selfish, or jealous or hysr don't make the grade in another's eyes. It's worse when there is no conditioning. This is sad all the way down to the abyss where we collect those hurting memories.
love and peace,