|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Oh, William...this is so beautiful. Many times I've repeated this same sadness. Now I only want to recall the memories of their coming, rather than leaving. But the haunting silence of children gone from your home certainly lingers...guess that's why I leave my TV running all day, not watching, just overcoming the silence. Your words in this poem are so "complete"!
|Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
|Soul stirring and beautiful poem, William! I know well that feeling -- and also the feeling of the expectation and joyful hope of next year's visit!|
|Reviewed by SaPAth AnANd
|I feel sad reading this,You have penned this excellent!
Thank you for sharing William!
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|That had to be so hard! I know my grandparents were the only ones in my life back then that I felt really cared about me. Believe me...you will be missed too!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Oh sad! My own tears fell as memories return of my little grandson and how much he has grown each time I see his happy little smile. We love those kids William and our hearts stay full until the next time.
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Such a vivid portrayal that captures the sadness of the moment so fluently. I found this so very touching to read. Well done William.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh my I am on tears.....I hate goodbyes!!
You touched my heart with this one..all teary eyed and snotty now!!
|Reviewed by Bella Christopher (Reader)
|Thank you for sharing this. It is steeped in love
and affection for those you love so much. I live
300 miles from my sweet mom, dad, and brother whom I adore.
It hurts when one of us pulls out of that drive and
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|It does hurt. I still see my son driving off with his mum six years back. That is agony...|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|What the hell, get in your car and go visit them...Ed|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oh William how deeply I feel this one! You wrote such a beautiful poem for the occasion, even though it is sad, yet you have the wonderful memories and the love shared. Blessings to you!