A Mundane Blessing
by Kimmy Van Kooten
Monday, October 16, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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In my senses, where whispers meet the drawings of my soul
Behold! I drew an angel...
In my senses,
where whispers meet the drawings of my soul
Behold! I drew an angel
...a divine being sitting, with her scepter half raised
High above the headstones
some big, some small,
no names engraved
Others were sculpted on a marble base
All fleshed , in equal rest
with their backs lying towards a Hell
Their eyes are facing up to Heavenís Blessed
Allowing my pencil to draw no pelle
I saw a gray haze fading to a higher place
under some sun of an emptiness
Shadows cast against all alone
there contrived on every stone
Now, my angel wore a majestic gown
Anointing souls whether up or down
A city scene amongst incessant mortals
in a metropolis of such windowed mortars
The look she had was an earthborn sad
Divinity guessed, when then she asked...
"Will I ever get off this hill?"
"Canít they judge by their own soulís will?"
O Sovereign spirit, with a mirthless face
hallowing souls in my imagines space
Blessings, Blessings unto you!
in a mundane rue!
God so help us if this were true !
Copyright October 2006/07/08
Kimmy Van Kooten
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|Reviewed by Lois Christensen
|Good christian write, and can see the angels. In fact they are surrounding us everywhere always. nice write.|
|Reviewed by William Haynes
|Perhaps angels and mortals have much in common
nice to read your work once more
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|The poetic description of your picture fills me with awe. Both are truly magnificent!
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Stunning poetry and illustration, Kimmy - inspired, inspiring - well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Kimmy....gem of a write...a real poem for sure...classic!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|WWWWWOOOOWWwwww!!!!! This was channeled from the divine Kimmy..Awesome and BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!
Peace & Love,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thank you for sharing your gifts, Kimmy. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A very interesting poem of a wonderful 3D drawing. Yes, I can see the angel there.
Wonderful artwork and poem! I enjoyed both!!!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)