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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
10/25/2006 |
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Oh, my............this one's s c a r y, Fee. Hope you're okay.......
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/24/2006 |
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hmmm..now you have me thinking..and a little worried..:(
I hope this is fiction and not a reflection of your state of soul,heart and mind.
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/23/2006 |
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"the heart forgot the clock." Love it.
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| Reviewed by Gloria Gay |
10/23/2006 |
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| What a wonderful depiction of a "mood" that comes to us sometimes, either triggered by an event or a memory. The theme is universal, though the poem may have been inspired by personal happenings. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/23/2006 |
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Sounds like a sad acceptance.............
hope things look better soon
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
10/23/2006 |
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Oh, Fee. You sound. . .depressed? "naked in the rain" conveys the mood perfectly. Chills a n d draws. Cold's in my bones, and I
feel the peeling. . .better not read it again 'til later. Now go inside and put on your woolies and a nice, warm pair of slippers.
Then write to me and tell me you are All Better. Love ya!
'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS: Thank you so much for being so supportive. Means the world! ~~~PS2~~What I forgot. Don't understand "nse." Am I
being dense? Wouldn't doubt it.
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/23/2006 |
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| Sweet |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/23/2006 |
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Emotive offering Felix!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/23/2006 |
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Wonderful writing, Fee; well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
10/23/2006 |
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Awesome, deep emotional poetry my friend.
~Linda |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
10/23/2006 |
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Intense in thought...nicely done Felix...
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/22/2006 |
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| This is a sad poem in analysis. Yet we must all hope for better days. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
10/22/2006 |
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you have some very deep thoughts in this verse, relayed in an intriguing manner!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/22/2006 |
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| Felix this one is poetry in motion well expressed. |
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| Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson |
10/22/2006 |
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Excellent Felix...the emotional grip in this verse is clear. I enjoyed much.
Allen |
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| Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield |
10/22/2006 |
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I really enjoyed the last stanza. It is a thinking poem and you did a wonderful job.
Antoinette |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/22/2006 |
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Geez, I'd have to go along with Susan -- this poem really makes you think, and it does give new meaning to being bare to the bone. Sexy picture to go with it, you devil you! Very nice poem, Fee.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/22/2006 |
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| Our heart is exposed when it is broken, and like a clock that's lost its hands it just ticks on endllessy no longer fulfilling its purpose. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/22/2006 |
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When the heart is forlorned the travel takes us all into a naked rain. I don't think I've ever realized this mood before but it sure grasps at the meaning of being bared to the bone.
Love,
Susn |
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