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naked rain
by Felix LeRoy Perry

Sunday, October 22, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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naked in the rain I wash my soul

shivers as if in beads of morning dew

rinse softly neath the gentle moonlight


I babare soul to the Northwind

I walk where hearts grow cold

into the barren waste of night


sins are open to the Gods

hearts possessed now lost

withered by the lack of will to fight


skin peeled back and bleeding

rain frozen now in death grip

who can say if this is right


hickory dickory dock

the heart forgot the clock

the clock struck home

Iíve been left to roam

hickory, dickory dock





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Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 10/25/2006
Oh, my............this one's s c a r y, Fee. Hope you're okay.......

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 10/24/2006 you have me thinking..and a little worried..:(

I hope this is fiction and not a reflection of your state of soul,heart and mind.

Reviewed by Lori Moore 10/23/2006
"the heart forgot the clock." Love it.

Reviewed by Gloria Gay 10/23/2006
What a wonderful depiction of a "mood" that comes to us sometimes, either triggered by an event or a memory. The theme is universal, though the poem may have been inspired by personal happenings.
Reviewed by A PAX 10/23/2006
Sounds like a sad acceptance.............
hope things look better soon
pax A
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 10/23/2006
Oh, Fee. You sound. . .depressed? "naked in the rain" conveys the mood perfectly. Chills a n d draws. Cold's in my bones, and I
feel the peeling. . .better not read it again 'til later. Now go inside and put on your woolies and a nice, warm pair of slippers.
Then write to me and tell me you are All Better. Love ya!
'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS: Thank you so much for being so supportive. Means the world! ~~~PS2~~What I forgot. Don't understand "nse." Am I
being dense? Wouldn't doubt it.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 10/23/2006
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/23/2006
Emotive offering Felix!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 10/23/2006
Wonderful writing, Fee; well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Linda Hill 10/23/2006
Awesome, deep emotional poetry my friend.

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow 10/23/2006
Intense in thought...nicely done Felix...

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 10/22/2006
This is a sad poem in analysis. Yet we must all hope for better days. Victor
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen 10/22/2006
you have some very deep thoughts in this verse, relayed in an intriguing manner!

Reviewed by J M 10/22/2006
Felix this one is poetry in motion well expressed.
Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson 10/22/2006
Excellent Felix...the emotional grip in this verse is clear. I enjoyed much.

Reviewed by Antoinette Kopperfield 10/22/2006
I really enjoyed the last stanza. It is a thinking poem and you did a wonderful job.
Reviewed by CJ Heck 10/22/2006
Geez, I'd have to go along with Susan -- this poem really makes you think, and it does give new meaning to being bare to the bone. Sexy picture to go with it, you devil you! Very nice poem, Fee.
Reviewed by George Carroll 10/22/2006
Our heart is exposed when it is broken, and like a clock that's lost its hands it just ticks on endllessy no longer fulfilling its purpose.
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 10/22/2006
When the heart is forlorned the travel takes us all into a naked rain. I don't think I've ever realized this mood before but it sure grasps at the meaning of being bared to the bone.

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