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|Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
|Understanding relief. Gooooooooooooooooooood Point Made in such few words; amazing!
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A great personification of the bus. I can almost hear "him/her" sigh. Nicely done. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by H. Lena Jones
|Hey Karla, that's clever. Can be interpreted on several levels. For instance, a pregnant woman finally giving birth...dropping her load, as it were! She would feel relief, right? Well done! :)
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|Wonderful how you give the school bus a voice and with accuracy as well.
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|this one made me smile~ (:
|Reviewed by J M
|Humor Oh Karla this is good.
Light & peace,
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|This is a great write here Karla, keep it up and be blessed
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Our buses aren't kidless long enough between loads for much relief I don't think..lol I know the drivers need more in between...) Cute write!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Sooo well done, Karla. Says it all visually as well as syllabically. As Victor says, sounds like an exhausted mother putting her feet up with a well-earned cup of tea for 5 minutes peace and quiet. Conjures much with a few well-placed words. TY K xx|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|With all the children jumping up and down, no wonder the bus need relief. Must have been painful. Victor|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Must have read Ed's sitting on the bog one first, then these metaphors..|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
This could very well be an advertisement for a laxitive. Sometimes, I imagine, that full bus can feel like being constipated.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Human cargo is very heavy Karla. Lovely scenes and imageries.
You brother in Africa
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|After talking to Shiela, another writer on the den and also school bus driver I can surely appreciate this write.
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|Cute little life experience poem here. Empathetic to all bus drivers.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
This is clever, original,and totally you! The words you come up with stirs the imagination! Very well done poem; take a bow! BRAVA, Karla!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|LOL, this piece has a lot of significance, Karla. My husband is retired from an Engineering career and drives a school bus! I'll have to print this out for him. The relief belongs to the driver, not the bus, rest assured! Excellent poem!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|If i were the bus, I would quit...ed|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Yes! As a former school bus driver, in a life long ago, you just gave me a most vivid flashback, Karla!|
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Felt a big weight getting lifted off my mind reading this..;-)
Highly original and imaginative composition