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Sambo with the Sun
by Dawn Field

Thursday, October 26, 2006
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Do you wanna touch me?
Oh yeah do you wanna touch me?
I'm hot and smoky
Aint no ashes here
Just fire
Yeah baby just fire.

Gonna sambo with the sun
Gonna salsa with the moon
I've got to get it all done
Cuz life is over too soon
way too soon...

Do you wanna feel me?
Oh yeah do you wanna feel me?
I'm soft and silky
Aint no barb wire here
Just cream
Yeah baby just cream.
Lick it up for me
mmmmmmmm Oh yeah baby...

Gonna sambo with the sun
Gonna salsa with the moon
I've got to get it all done
Cuz life is over too soon
way too soon...

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Reviewed by Shawn Field 11/14/2006
"Gonna sambo with the sun
Gonna salsa with the moon ..."

Ahh what a great visual!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/27/2006
"Moving" verses that read like a song, Dawn. Well done. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/26/2006

Very sensual and thought provoking write.
Reviewed by Brett Moore 10/26/2006
An aching to truly live coupled with a fear of not getting it all done in one lifetime. Great poem.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily 10/26/2006
Do the hot, saucy Sambo before it's too late. Sounds like good advice.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/26/2006
Sounds like fun to me!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/26/2006
Smokin song lyrics as well as a great poem, I can see this being played sweet and low in a smokey Jazz bar. Wonderful Dawn.

Reviewed by richard cederberg 10/26/2006
Dawn ...

This reads as a song and presents the author, or protagonist, in a light unbecoming a lady. In my eyes woman are not things to be used, they are treasures to be adored.

Of course I could be wrong, this could also be a metaphor a travel agency would use to coerce people to spend time around volcanoes on far-flung islands.

You allusion to the role Pamela Anderson played in Barb Wire was cute.

Keep writing ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
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