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I am lost, without you, my love!
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Friday, October 27, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Every drop of my love,
I spill in your heart
but yet you doubt me,
and dishearten the spirit of love.

Tell me, my love; tell me,
where should I go, and what
should I do, to win back
your love again, and be with you?

Without you,
I am a sky
completely naked
without the stars.

Without you,
I am not more
than the muffled sound of the sea
wandering among the cadavers of time.

But in every moment,
I build a castle of hope
and rouse a hundred forms
to caress your core.

But in every moment,
I sing the song of love,
and owe the fresh lease
of life to you, O beloved.

Ah! As a child
faraway from the mothers whisper
in the darkness of the night
I am lost, without you, my love!

Let your eyes
rest upon my eyes for a while,
and let the sun of our love
mount from your lap, and kiss the sky.

Copyright 2006 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Ronald Hull 10/28/2006
I am torn. Is it a bittersweet love of high value, or a tortured codependency that goes nowhere?

Ron
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 10/28/2006
This is beautiful Bhuwan, such a lovely and deeply romantic poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 10/27/2006
This poem can take one's breath away...Absolutely moving...
and penned from the heart, Well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Reviewed by S J (Reader) 10/27/2006
Bhuwan,
This is so lovely!
Stunning romantic lines, excellently written!

Thank you,
Sheila
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/27/2006
Bhuwan
your romantic poetry is as accelerating
As your wisdom
Have a nice day my friend
Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 10/27/2006
The muse moved through you in this romantic poem.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/27/2006
So romantically pleading, Bhuwan. Well done, my friend. I am sure many can relate. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 10/27/2006
A beautiful if slightly sad romantic Viennese waltz of love. You outshine many at the den. Thanks for visiting my den. Victor
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/27/2006
Bhuwan a glorious poetic symphony to your love! I love this a keeper! Thank you!

Eileen
Reviewed by A PAX 10/27/2006
so emotional........this goes into my library loved it
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 10/27/2006
Hi Bhuwan:

This is a poem of great longings, and is very romantic! Wonderful write!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)



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