|Reviewed by William Bonilla
Love & peace
|Reviewed by Founding Editor
fading autumn skies-
even the songbirds
This is simply lovely. - Founding Editor
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|an interesting dichotomy in emotion and imagery in these...both are delighful!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|hello Lori, song birds dream, your words beam, whata team|
|Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
|I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving Lori,I love your poetry,it's awesome and always so original.
Love and my best wishes always to you and yours
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Scorpions and shrews hey...yes I've known a few of those in my day...lol...especially when they hem and haw and tell their indecisive lies.
The second one is very beautiful with very scenic imagery. Thanks for sharing sis.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|Fantabulous! :) Especially love #1. G r e a t w o r k, my friend, g r e a t w o r k ! 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|So much in so few lines.
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Ahhh the "Queen Of Ku" has returned. As always delivering so much in so few lines. Welcome Back|
|Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka
|Good to see you back. I like the first riddle.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Aww babe of the den great to read you again, evener greater to hope you put up a better bio pic..|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|These are lovely. 1 has 11 syllables & the other 15, right? Can they be different in that respect? I like the 2nd better. Cheers|
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Nice work, Lori.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Lovely haiku's Lori!!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Beautiful haikus, I liked the second very much. Victor|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wondeful Ku's Lori, strong and with purpose.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very deep ku with lots of emotions running through them. Always excellent Lori!ET|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Thought-inciting haiku, Lori. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|Good haiku, Lori. Good to read you again. ~~Carmen|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Scorpions, shrews, and songbirds - well done, Lori!|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|You have taken such opposites and managed to connect them with a skill that only you possess, Lori. I love them both and for very different reasons. The first rings so true here in New Mexico where mud slinging is the fare of the day. The second touches my soul, for autumn is my favorite of all seasons. Today as I drove by the Bosque, I saw that the trees along the Rio Grande are now bedecked in golden splendor overtaking the last of the green. Soon the reds will paint the landscape and signal the end to this glorious season. Wonderful work!
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Well defined and intriguing haikus..
Your mantle as Queen of the Haikus rests easy on your crown..