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Lori L Moore

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Saturday, October 28, 2006
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A Set of Two.

indecisive lies
scorpions and shrews
November 7th

fading autumn skies-
even the songbirds

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Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/24/2009
Woderful imagery
Excellent write

Love & peace
Reviewed by Founding Editor 1/29/2009


fading autumn skies-
even the songbirds

This is simply lovely. - Founding Editor
Reviewed by E. Richardson 11/26/2006
an interesting dichotomy in emotion and imagery in these...both are delighful!
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 11/25/2006
hello Lori, song birds dream, your words beam, whata team
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 11/20/2006
I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving Lori,I love your poetry,it's awesome and always so original.
Love and my best wishes always to you and yours
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 11/17/2006
Scorpions and shrews hey...yes I've known a few of those in my when they hem and haw and tell their indecisive lies.

The second one is very beautiful with very scenic imagery. Thanks for sharing sis.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 11/16/2006
Fantabulous! :) Especially love #1. G r e a t w o r k, my friend, g r e a t w o r k ! 'Pea' <3
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 11/8/2006
So much in so few lines.

Love it.


Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 11/1/2006
Ahhh the "Queen Of Ku" has returned. As always delivering so much in so few lines. Welcome Back
Reviewed by Alex Nodopaka 10/30/2006
Good to see you back. I like the first riddle.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 10/29/2006
Aww babe of the den great to read you again, evener greater to hope you put up a better bio pic..
Reviewed by Randall Barfield 10/29/2006
These are lovely. 1 has 11 syllables & the other 15, right? Can they be different in that respect? I like the 2nd better. Cheers
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 10/29/2006
Nice work, Lori.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/29/2006
Lovely haiku's Lori!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 10/28/2006
Beautiful haikus, I liked the second very much. Victor
Reviewed by Felix Perry 10/28/2006
Wondeful Ku's Lori, strong and with purpose.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/28/2006
Very deep ku with lots of emotions running through them. Always excellent Lori!ET
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 10/28/2006
Thought-inciting haiku, Lori. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 10/28/2006
Good haiku, Lori. Good to read you again. ~~Carmen
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 10/28/2006
Scorpions, shrews, and songbirds - well done, Lori!
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 10/28/2006
You have taken such opposites and managed to connect them with a skill that only you possess, Lori. I love them both and for very different reasons. The first rings so true here in New Mexico where mud slinging is the fare of the day. The second touches my soul, for autumn is my favorite of all seasons. Today as I drove by the Bosque, I saw that the trees along the Rio Grande are now bedecked in golden splendor overtaking the last of the green. Soon the reds will paint the landscape and signal the end to this glorious season. Wonderful work!
Take care,
Reviewed by Peter Paton 10/28/2006

Well defined and intriguing haikus..

Your mantle as Queen of the Haikus rests easy on your crown..

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