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Lori L Moore

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Does a rose
know her petal's
once they lay at her side?
Their tender, soft, beauty
she's given with pride...

Can two passionate lovers
love after the ride?
their total surrender
and obsession's tears dried...

Can a woman
love a man
even after she's cried,
tears of passion,
rejection, deception, and pride?

Can my broken heart be mended
though it seems so far gone?

Can my sins be forgiven
through multiplied wrong?

Will a man remember
once we give him our all...
Two passionate lovers
obeying the call...

Does a rose
know her petal's
once they lay at her side?
Does she realize their value,
as though something has died?

Certain things can only happen once.

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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 7/22/2002
im overcome with awe.. that question has always been there.. what ABOUT those fallen petals.. another fabulous write! you've GOT it! katy.
Reviewed by Kala Starkey (Reader) 6/24/2002
Loss of words, that was awesome.
Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski 6/17/2002
Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski 6/14/2002
Can an heart mend? This is a way to mend it, but you have to find it by yourself. No human can help you.
Reviewed by Larry Skahill 6/14/2002
I only put "10" because there is no "11" - this is a special one....I want to know the answer to the question you pose
Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader) 6/13/2002
A wonderful work Lori
Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader) 6/13/2002
An amazing piece of writing my dear friend,it is so good to be back and reading all the wonderful words that I have been missing,,Charlie
Reviewed by Samantha Kennedy (Reader) 6/12/2002
Bravo!! great write
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 6/12/2002
I think this to be one of your very best!10/10 and more!
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 6/12/2002
I have to agree with Amor... wonderful write!
Reviewed by John Turi 6/12/2002
Reviewed by C. Gourlay (Reader) 6/12/2002
deep contemplation on the greater nature of things, i have no answers, only more questions, but thank you for expressing yourself with such eloquence
Reviewed by Alain Gracio 6/11/2002
Beautiful writing indeed!
Reviewed by m w 6/11/2002
Can a passionate heart ever turn its back on love? Someone stepped on a very delicate flower. I hope she does not wilt from the experience.
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 6/11/2002
{{ Lori }} I dont think I could say it better than Alexander.... Just like the rose,the woman has her dormant period.. a time to breath and renew.. then the light shines on her again and she is even more beautiful than before...
Love and Light
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 6/11/2002

Light and love, Jo
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa 6/11/2002
Very thoughtful and beautiful piece. Thanks.
Reviewed by Dena Moore 6/11/2002
Very beautiful, and heart-felt...
Reviewed by Dena Moore 6/11/2002
Beautiful write Lori
Thanks so much for all your kind reviews of my work... I appreciate it!
Reviewed by Linda Hill 6/11/2002
Very impressive write! Loved this.
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 6/11/2002
Wow Lori, I felt such emotion from this. I dont know, maybe she does know, and the falling of her petals are her tears...for being once loved and her beauty and grace now forgotten. <sigh>
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 6/11/2002
Wow! Lori this is powerfully amazing, I love it.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/11/2002
You have raised some good questions. Well-done, Lori!

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/11/2002
Very bittersweet and lovely... I agree some things only happen once...exceptional Lori
Reviewed by Edmund Canto 6/11/2002
Another excellent one. Yes, a man will still remember you always, once you give it your all. Aloha, Mundo
Reviewed by Jo Janoski 6/11/2002
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 6/11/2002
Can a woman love a man even after she's cried ??...the answer is definately... 'yes', dear love and I were apart for many years after he left me me for her...I waited ,and cried,and finally, he came back ...and he stayed ...and is still here(in my life)...after the tears 'love returns'...but only if it is 'true love'.
I love your poem .it is deep and beautiful.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 6/11/2002
Good questions, Lori. I think of life as a series of deaths or transformations. Just like a rose sheds its petals, we peel off that which is false in our lives, and find our true selves. Beautiful poem.
Reviewed by D. Enise 6/11/2002
Without question!! A "Very" powerful write!
essence of innocence, our own vulnerabilities..
Beautiful pedals!
Reviewed by Chris Stevens (Reader) 6/11/2002
very beautiful words.... and very powerful questions..... I hope and believe that yes, yes it must... how could anyone forget something so wonderful.. so beautiful .. something that you give so much of yourself!!!
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 6/11/2002 continues on...such as the tender petals of a rose even after they wilt and die...after they fall off and eventually return to the does the mother plant in time. We begin to die the very moment we are born. but it is in the interim that we live, laugh, love and cry to the utmost. Beautiful write.
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/11/2002
Beautiful, poignant write...

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