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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
11/19/2006 |
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| this is beautifu-maybe there is hope for me yet!!! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
11/7/2006 |
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Beautiful and tender write indeed...full of passion and fire. I am anxious to read more...this has touched a place deep within my heart.
Blessings,
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
11/5/2006 |
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| Vesna - YOur longing Flame is felt deeply! I want you to experience your every willing feelings of your heart and Soul! YOur passion runs DEEP! and deeper with your writings of eternity! I love to travel your heart!Thank you for sharing it with us too! WArm HuGs, Sheee -Have a GREAT week ahead and to feel the Harvest MOon most delights- |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
11/5/2006 |
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If there is such a thing as prophetic rapture, it fills these lines with the music of a love that knows its destiny and the light of a soul happy to claim it. Thrilling work indeed.
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/5/2006 |
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| a poetic gem, Vensa ... the quest will end because like you, i believe soul mates transcend time, place and circumstance ... |
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| Reviewed by Russ Okamura |
11/4/2006 |
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| Your poetry has great passion and your writing style is very unique. You are very talented. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
11/3/2006 |
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I agree with Eileen, this is magnificent; romantic, surreal, imaginatively erotic. Thank you for sharing, Vesna.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be." |
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| Reviewed by Chuck Keller |
11/3/2006 |
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| As long as there is hope for love, there is reason to breathe. Great poem, Kiddo. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/3/2006 |
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| Vesna, this exquisite verse put me on a bed of heavenly clouds to dream upon. magnificent poem! Thank you!;-)ET |
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| Reviewed by Steve Ralph |
11/3/2006 |
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What a truely beautiful expression of love,
Thank you for sharing it,
Steve |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
11/2/2006 |
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Very good Vesna. It's moving and
a tribute to the quest of life. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
11/2/2006 |
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| this poem spoke to my soul, Vesna. thanks for the consistency of what you write. wish I could manage that in my own work. take care, Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader) |
11/2/2006 |
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Wow!
Deeply touching, Ves! |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
11/2/2006 |
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| Oh Vesna ...such tender passion and an intensity of the soul in this superb poem. A keeper! Love Panda :) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/2/2006 |
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| Wonderful fulfilment and consummation of what it means to live and breathe, Vesna... in love. Funny, I have been brooding on a poem not yet "birthed" about being awoken by life as a romance, with thoughts not a million miles from these. Though the body waxes frail, still its colour and vibrancy grows stronger... Your appreciation of myself and work blows me away. I am touched beyond measure. Thank you, and for being such an inspiration, too. Bless you for these gorgeous autumn of life thoughts. LOL K xx |
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| Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez |
11/1/2006 |
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This is truly wonderful ! i love the lines and the intense and
subtle truth of life both the
and in it I feel your spiritualies Truth; Both the physical that is temporary however long and the Eternal life !
Jesus love will save all of our days!
be well
Rich Criso |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
11/1/2006 |
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| these lines r very thoughtful thanks for sharing cheers |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
11/1/2006 |
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I like the sentiment your words communicate. Good to read you again, Vesna.
Carmen :-) |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/1/2006 |
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These are most captivating sentiments that stir the reader's soul, Vesna. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by J M |
11/1/2006 |
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Beautiful once more when i read you vesna my heart often hurts.......for the longing and the waiting you continue to still look for the twin.
Light & peace,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/1/2006 |
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Deeply heartfelt piece!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
11/1/2006 |
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Why leave it till the evening?
This is a beautiful write, though a tad sad.. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
11/1/2006 |
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Vesna
You are the Queen of the Den,.... and your all consuming poetry has touched new heights of fervor and passion here..
Hope is never lost to a Child of God..and Blessings come masked in disguise..;-)
Love and Prayers
Peter |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
11/1/2006 |
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You write with the unrequited sighs of a master Vesna. There will be a sunrise!
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
11/1/2006 |
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Dear Vesna,
I'm sure that the last breath is just as sweet as the first. May you be blest in your quest.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
11/1/2006 |
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| We are at peace when we find love in our lives. I hope the author of this quest finds the love she aches for, spiritually or in her heart long before the last breath. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
11/1/2006 |
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a heartfelt piece
excellently written
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
11/1/2006 |
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Deeply felt manifestaton of love's power herein, Blue!
Beautifully written.
Peace,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
11/1/2006 |
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oh, my goodness, this has me tearing up!!! this poem is a beautiful expression of faith in the coming of love....and how precious it is, probably even more precious after having waited so very long in faith. This is just plain beautiful!
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/1/2006 |
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It is sad, but it is written so beautifully!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
11/1/2006 |
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| So sad this poem, though with such tenderness you express so well. Love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/1/2006 |
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Yearning and hope override sadness and dissappointment in this write of what cannot be now but may be in the future. As so often is stated and may be in this case...the last shall be first, and perhaps that is the best. Great expressions of the heart Ves.
Fee |
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