|Reviewed by Simon Barreiros
|A wonderful work. And very true as well. Ther is no love in one who lusts nor lust in one who loves. Observe our fellows in the world, do they not tire of lust, greed or gluttony. Seems they don't amazingly.
Loved it when Tom Waits said,"All that you love is all you own"
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Susan, this is a lovely poem. Your words ring so true. Very well done and I enjoyed.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Lust has no future...I agree!!
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|excellent displays of personification cheers fortunately lust forgets!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Lust is instant; love is patient; love waits. Passion grows over time. An excellent message in well written poetry, Susan!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|And dull dies...
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
Lust has no future
Love is where it is at..
Love and Blessings
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|Wonderfully said Susan...so right|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love is passion without fear
How true, and quite a poem, Susan.
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|A lovely flow to this dynamic poem. I think of spring all winter too..|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|passion endures but lust can sure be a lot of fun ... seriously, your define passion eloquently ...|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Lust is deadly, it kills the soul. It leaves only an empty husk. Excellent poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|coming from the pen that knows passion and love well enough to write like this about it! missed reading you sis! Great poem! Eileen|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|An awesome write ...Susan
Well penned and presented
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Sweet pen you've created|
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|That is so true, lust is just a transient emotion, passion is soul born. Beautiful write Susan.
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Passion is loves mate and between the two there is joy forever.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|A very passionate poem that wraps passion in a fabric of silk words enticing the reader with the sensual images you portray. You are also so write to differentiate between passion and lust|
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|AAAAAawwwwwww...This is astonishingly beautiful Susan..It is what life is worth LIVING for...
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|Passion dreams the love and shouts
I love you with everything
An old man once said to me that compared to God's love, man's love was lust. A bit brutal, I thought, because I love not lust my wife, I thought. But I soon got the gist of what he was saying. Your poem here brought the old man and what he said to mind.
I love your line about passion shouting I love you with everything. That's the difference between lust and passion. The former has its own way and sleeks off like a guilty dog, while passion is emotional content that leaves its uplifting mark on the recipient.
Nah, your poem is not a theory of passion but a colourful depiction of it.