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Screaming Eyes (Inspired by Jay Chattin)
by Marilyn Seray

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Screaming eyes, distorted faces
Skinless hands from unknown places
Reaching up to take a hold
Wanting to consume my soul

All my sins come hurling back
Disguised as crows and dressed in black
Cawing, taunting, flying ‘round
Transfusing ooze for my blood to drown.

Slowly dying with no escape
Closing in, the veils opaque
Smothering, choking scream with fright
Screaming eyes took me last night.

© all rights reserved MS 2002

This was inspired by Jay Chattin's "My Death" The picture had such an impact on me.

This was actually a dream that I had last night.
Thanks Jay :-)

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Reviewed by Debra Conklin 10/26/2003
O.K. this is too scary, for me. Moving on to something less frightening. :-) Debbie
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/18/2002
>>>chills < < < up and down my spine...yipe. INtense!! the pic's gon' give me nightmares for nights to come...thanks a lot! :0 EXCELLENT, WELL DONE! "it musta been those chilidogs you ate before bedtime" is what my daddy used to say when i'd have a bad dream...(((HUGS))) and pleasant dreams, marilyn! love, karla. :)
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 7/7/2002
Bad dream, dramatic images, good writing
Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader) 7/2/2002
deep intensity that offers sympathy to the receiever of this vision.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 7/2/2002
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 6/26/2002
Spooky, vivid write. Congrats to you and Jay (for inspiring it). Well done.
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 6/18/2002
Wow, such vivid and dark imagery!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 6/16/2002
Chilly! wonderful write.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 6/16/2002
Wow! This was awesome write, Marilyn!!!!!!! I liked this a lot!!!!!

Dreams are terrible sometimes, but I'm glad you can write it out.

May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Theresa Koch 6/15/2002
Reviewed by jude forese 6/13/2002
vividly powerful!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/13/2002
Vividly expressed! Wow--intense write!!
Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader) 6/13/2002
Hope you'll never have such dreams again. Think of beautiful scenes.
Reviewed by lovechild 6/13/2002
Wow what an image!! No thank you may sleep with the lights on then again......wonderfully done
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 6/13/2002
My sins as crows..yikes, that visual alone has me rethinking the confessional!
Reviewed by Energy Shifter (Reader) 6/13/2002
Where there is darkness there is also light
Reviewed by Tracey Hardie 6/13/2002
Excellent write... the darkside..dont you just hate those haunting dreams.
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 6/12/2002
Shudders, I hate those kind of dreams...
Love and Light
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 6/12/2002
Terrible dream, hope you have many nice ones in the future.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 6/12/2002
I do not believe I would like to experience those kind of nightmares...that is too real..An excellent job in your description and the pic matches as well
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/12/2002
Whoa...what a horrific dream Marilyn...glad it turned into a knock-out poem, this is fantastic...;-) see it's true good can come from bad...Please no more
Reviewed by Tiana 6/12/2002
A scary dream sweetie! wow! lol Great write, but spooky! lol
Tiana ;-p
Reviewed by Linda Hill 6/12/2002
Good write, Marilyn.
Reviewed by Scada (Reader) 6/12/2002
What a horrendous dream!! I suffer from nightmares too, and sympathize with anyone else who wakes up in a cold sweat. Great write.


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