|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|He didn't deserve you, Eileen. There are too many good apples out there to waste any time at all on the likes of him! You go girl!
Love and a great big virtual hug,
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Too many like him out there...you hold out for a connoisseur Eileen.
peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|For sure.....always something
enjoyed this dose of reality for most
they got alot of it out here....Peace
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Lady Minx, I just don't think they have the same mix of emotions, you expound this very well I think ;) oh wish that I were wrong but hey ho onward and upward ;) superb phraseology in this and just loved those clever closing last two lines. Bittersweet my dear friend and brilliant as ever. Much love Impx|
|Reviewed by S J (Reader)
|I feel this poem deep within, dear Eileen!
"should have realized from his past
he would never find satiety
he was a glutton for variety"
Oh yes, brilliantly written poem!
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
So much about men is the visual thing, and not the heart thing. Even when you know it and have victory over it, you still struggle with it.
Many men, in their pursuit of self gratification, have left multitudes of wounded souls in their wake. In my early twenties I was one of them. Its a good thing that God forgives.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Just giggling after reading Ed M's comment....boys geeees will we ever have the strenght to cope with them???
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Gotta kiss many frogs before we find the princess.
Nice one Tiggs keep bouncing, the faster the better..
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|These words show the sadness of offering too grand a buffet.
Methinks he was no connoisseur of the delectible fruits you offered, minx; and showed he wasn't worthy, either!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I'd a thought with melons like yours he would have all the variety he could have handled...;) Ed|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|excellent presentation of these thoughts. I knew him, too... Dawn|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|As much sister wisely says he was of the 'buffet' set... well done Eileen!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|I always said you're a minx, putting up all the "Bon di Dio" knowing I must cut down on my intake. And if he did not appreciate all you had to give him, forget him, he's not worth the trouble. Lovely poem as usual. Victor|
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|Enjoyed this E.T.. Well written.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|A glutton for variety, you say. Figures! Loved your poem, Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Gluttony is truly a terrible sin.|
|Reviewed by J M
|Clever the fruits and desires blended in a variety well done.........:)|
|Reviewed by Joyce Devenish
|I love this one. It is something I would have written myself if I was able. Been there, done that. Thanks a million for writing it. Best wishes Joyce McInnes|
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|he would never find satiety
he was a glutton for variety
Very hard to please. Brilliantly written poem. GBQ
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Whater ever you place before a lover, his appetite will soon wane and look for another.|
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|Poetry music for the soul comes from your soul..Yeay!!!
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|for those types....you can only love em and leave em...|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A powerful write Eileen
But I think you gave him
a bit too much, he was too greedy
he had to searched for more
Love & paece