|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|This is lovely, wistful, Eileen. My favorite lines,
"And feel my heart is just as bare
For your warmth is no longer near"
Well said, my friend. Excellent imagery.
|Reviewed by Lisa Noelle Swartz
|I get a little obsessed with autumn…write numerous poems about it as well, but I really appreciated your clean, sensible choice of words here, "...suns new burn" against the backdrop of a naked season. ~LNNS|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Every couplet forms a link in a garland that just speaks of completeness. Effortless and seamless in both rhythm and rhyme. This has poetic resonance and gestalt, Eileen... a tree-poem with deep roots bonded into fertile soil. I have hitherto been not such a great fan of autumn, but this year, in my new environment at the coast and on heathland, I am absolutely loving it and a willing convert! :)) And your poetry on the subject compounds its delicate and fragile beauty. As with Taylor's Man In The Moon write, this makes me itch to also write personifying trees. Soul-stirring, TY K xx|
|Reviewed by Brittany Renée
|As the gypsy child that I am, I am in love with the naturalness of your poem.|
|Reviewed by J M
|The changes of season effects us all I loved this one the comparisons of ones self with natures changes. Beautiful work....|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I always enjoy your nature poetry. I think the first poem I ever read of yours had an nature as part of its theme, a lesson we could learn from it. Wonderful. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|Romantic and earthy
just like love can be
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A poignant, powerful longing in this offering, Eileen...wonderful
peace and love, Carole
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Powerful longing - Powerful poem, Tiger Lily.|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Perhaps!!!! Who knows???? Great imagery and I love the comparison of nature to love. Victor|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|The beauty of nature in its nakedness is just so overwhelming to me at times...like this write.....the yearning is electrical sis!!
These are the lines of a poem I am working on!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|Perhaps by summer you'll return
Bringing the glow of suns new burn
I'm convinced he will..
beautiful work Eileen..
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
Powerful write, enjoyable meter and flow.
Thank you Eileen for the beauty of this poetry,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Now that is one interesting tree!!!!!! and of course I loved the writing you have shared with us.|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|Great images and thought penned well|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|enjoyed the imagery and sentiment of "naked trees" ...|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Wonderful as always|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Made me think of the old cliches...Look on The Bright Side, There's always a rainbow after the storm. Very powerful write, for we must keep going no matter how dark the storm. Beautiful sentiments my friend.
|Reviewed by Richard Hiebner
|A very enjoyable piece Eileen.
Thank you for sharing it.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|The voice of wisdom speaks to me again, thank you so much, God Bless, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|Wonderful analogies in this melancholy piece...
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Very spiritual in essence, always look ahead to a bright future, is a subtext here..|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
Beautifully written piece laced together with the threads of an undeniable and deep melancholy.
Light and Wisdom ...
Sugar Creek Chum ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|So sad to see the beautiful leaves blowing in every nook and corner of my yard waiting for me to gather them up where they will become compost for next years blooms.|
|Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
|This is BEAUTIFUL...I think you and I are on the same page..I spoke today about tree's with leaves gone..How glorious and beautiful Eileen~~
Love from the dove
|Reviewed by Rusty Daily
|Another good example of how you can relate nature to love