|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|loved the wording here
and the blinding imagery
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Quite intriguing, Roshan.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very intriguing write Roshan, with elusive imagery...Well written!...ET|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Peace comes in accepting also the ill fate that besets us. Find a broken pot made him lose this peace. Victor|
|Reviewed by J M
bravo this one I so enjoyed especially this fleeting line.
"The dragonflies are dying before you
Swallowing the purple sky !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Light & peace Joselyn