|Reviewed by Sandie May Angel-Joyce
|A very interesting write about this person you know.
Thank you for sharing!!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
|thought provoking~thank you Robert
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
|Reviewed by Robert Harrison
|You are talking about me, arn't you?
Thank you Robert.
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Enjoyed the churn of this poem, Jude. ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I like the way your bring people to life with your descriptions......I almost feel like I know them :-)|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Action may put Robert Jude Ace in traction unless he is Action Jackson. Just had to say that. ;-)
Good write about acting on our fear.
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|really good i especially like the last 6 lines catalyst dismay protag and way, day thanks for sharing a good read|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|if clarity would/could do it than maybe that's where my search should start.....but i sit and think of what color the sun gon be singing.....love your write!!!|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|A great write...to dream is to live. What if we had no dreams? We learn from the past so that the future may be happier, or at least that's the way it's supposed to be, but doesn't always work out that way. Great write!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|You Can Never Stop Dreaming Whence You Do You're Dead...
Another Your Z Best Yet...
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A poem with a good message! Well-done, Robert!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Peter Paton
To be both Progressive and Realistic is the way forward I believe in life.
Thoughtful and deep poetry..
|Reviewed by J M
|Excellent wisdom i read in this poem.|
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Astonishly haunting. . . . .
Surprizingly familiar. . . .
Written in the second person. . .
The 'He' could be. . . . .
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Three things here are striking ...
Seems a great combination of things to make any endeavor successful Robert. This is a different slant for you, almost like motivational therapy. Great write.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|An astute observation Ace.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|there's that balanced perspective that always does me good to read. thanks, Jude, for continuing to present the whole picture and (much as I grumble about it sometimes) for making us all think with mind and spirit. Dawn|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|"He is alive yet buried
In artifacts of ancient lives"...splended writing Jude!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent write Jude!!
|Reviewed by Art Sun
|Nice work...your thoughts are a view of us as we follow the path of this journey through life...hope and action ot acting upon action ...all in the same as we seek to better or become ourselves at higher levels of life...very nice work and a very enjoyable piece....
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
|"..Mountains would cease becoming obstacles..."
This line reminds me of the ancient Chinese proverb:
"It is not the mountain that wears you out. It is the grain of sand
in your shoe."
Thank you, Jude, for these great poems you post.
|Reviewed by Miss Pandora
|Deeply reflective, ...striking ...I could almost feel an ache as I read this...the hopeful close works so well. Panda :)|
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Great Job. I'm impressed by your poetic talent.|
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|"perhaps..." might not be enough clarity, but it's a possibility!
One never knows, or maybe, can never understand the steps some others need to take for their own "...new day"...we therefore are left with our own dismay and clingings to hope, "Acting upon Action"
You got me thinking, as usual, Jude!
I enjoy reading your works!
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|An excellent write, Robert!|
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|Such a person is truly dead to the living world around him. We are meant to live the "now" and study the past as a reminder not to repeat old silly mistakes. Excellent as usual. Victor|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|I think we all need a little hope and a little positive action, these days, Robert.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Hope gives us the reason for all our actions, for without hope all action is lost.|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Robert Your Write are deep
When I read these type of writes
they remind me, when I am at a football game
And the offensive is in a huddle
I thnk they are talking about me
Am I paranoid Or What? .....lol
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|OOOO. I love the iron heart, for personal reasons, can't mention the ex in public.
A little mix could serve him well...
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Puts into perspective the meaning of one's existence. Those ones who enjoy high well-being are the ones with a devotion to some kind of purpose beyond themselves. Acting upon Action reminds us to bring our daily efforts into better alignment. Doing something original and worthwhile will let one end up on the side of the ledger where others will follow with new social ethics to motivate our society...a clear image of the broader man will bring upon a new day, Jude...
|Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
|"Perhaps a little of both
Will bring upon a new day"
Robert, you've done it to me again. Hope by itself, will not bring anything about. It's like prayer without action. It goes into a hole of desperation.