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Our Worst Enemy
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Monday, December 04, 2006
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Or our best friend, it all depends on the person, whether things will worsen...

Our worst enemy is the head,
the one that produces what's said.
It knows all our fears,
harasses us over the years,
either holds back or flows tears.
It knows our weaknesses and strengths,
even our tolerance in lengths.

We can't run,
we can't hide,
we're apart of the heads ride.
Heads take us on trips,
are responsbile for all out flips.
The conscience and the sub,
are a divided club.

The conscience mind we control,
the unconscience is on auto scroll.
It can run away with life,
have us suffering much misery & strife.
If we don't put on a lid,
we might end up dead.

Dead might be a release,
the only way to get some peace.
From a contaminated brain,
that only wants to drain.
The bodies worst than cupid,
it loves to follow the brains stupid.

Young brains are worse,
they really have the stupid curse.
The longer a heads been around,
it should become more sound.
But quite a few remain hollow,
almost anything they will follow.



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Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
This is truly a poem to keep!
Your views are so true to life and I applaud you on this ONE!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Very interesting observations.
My head's been around pretty long--I sure hope it's sound by now, before it starts going the other way.
This was almost a rap. I enjoyed reading it.
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
This write IS Terrific!
Get a Brain!
Love it Grady
Love your mind!
Always a surprise
SAy it Clear and LOUD!
Love and HuGs,Sheeexoox
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Good observation, Grady! Love ya, Holly
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Great offering Grady!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Great thoughts coming from one who's head is in the right place, so to say. I agree with you, some grow up but remain hollow. Victor
Reviewed by Debby & Gordon Rosenberg
good observation of the distraction of the mind...
Reviewed by CJ Heck
You've covered just about everything here that the head can do or cannot do, One -- you're right, the longer a head has been around, it SHOULD become more sound, but it gets so doggone forgetful the older we get LOL. Your poetry is a pleasure to read.
Reviewed by Brett Moore
I think you summed it up perfectly. The mind is a mixed bag that we all have to live with. Nicely done.

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