We Could be Alone
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Friday, December 08, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
Print Save Become a Fan
A lots been happening bad, police officers and preachers being attacked and killed. Children being ran over in the street. It makes one wonder sometimes what this world is all about. Makes a writer or poet write good or bad depending. I might write controversy and contradictory but I never give up on my faith, never. Hope and faith are for real, live and in living color. Besides with me it's about stability, there's no way I'm going to be moving up and down the scale, I decided that I'm a believer and that's it. Everytime something bad happens I'm not going to be losing my faith and questioning God. I love being stable in thought and in life. In my poem I noted Kim and his family who where caught in the freezing mountains. Kim left his family for help but was later found frozen too death. Luckily his family survived. Thank God!
In this universe we could be alone,
there might not even be,
a God sitting on His throne.
Until this date and time around,
no other beings have been found.
They sent a ship to the stars,
found evidence of water on Mars.
Man doesn't have to travel at all,
to find evidence that God came too call.
No need for space exploration,
or any other explanation.
The only thing missing about God,
is a physical image in whole or in part.
In this universe's histories,
there's been plenty of world mysteries.
The greatest being the Holy Man,
with His God loving plan.
Inbetween coming and going,
man has no idea what he's doing.
We can't even live together a minute,
without some type violence in it.
The east hates the west,
seems no one knows what's best.
The west tries to rule,
only to be made out of a fool.
Happily the devil drools
at all us human fools.
Speaking of a devil,
no one's even sure he's around.
No physical evidence has been found.
I like to get to the truth,
there's no man living
who's witnessed anything for sure.
Everyone simply hopes and speculates,
others and preachers holy dictates.
don't worry about any of the decievers.
They're null and void anyway,
it even shows in their religious say.
But they're just as strong,
a person has to be to not want to belong.
The believers at least have hope,
a vision of a God in scope.
I'm with the believers,
I don't follow the decievers
or the non-believers.
I love too hope,
too me it's like Holy dope.
Some hope is better than none,
but I still have faith in the gun.
Hoodlums come too loot,
I know for sure the gun will shoot.
The animals in this world are real,
the mean one's we have too kill.
Life and death are for sure,
even some disease we can cure.
Time is for real on the clock,
so is the crime on the block.
The police are for real,
even some of their blood will spill.
Writers and poets are real,
poeming this stuff is a thrill.
These words I ink,
come from real thoughts I think.
Whether we're alone or not,
cold is cold and hot is hot.
In the news Kim froze,
this is the way life goes.
This is for sure
Want to review or comment on this
Click here to login!
Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|I like your write One! "We Could be Alone" specifically tells us that we are not, in that, you... who created it, believes and hopes there is! I'm hooked on the Holy dope too! It's the only high!
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|It is a mean world. Graciousness, respect, and common sense are things of the past. That is why it is nice to remember those who have those qualities, which you are one. A fine, from the heart work, Grady.
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Excellent write, my friend!!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Powerful statement Grady!!
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|You raised up many points and as a believer, I state that God can only be found in one's heart and that it is wrong to blame God for the doings of man who has free will to chose right or wrong. So if man can chose wrong, then there are demons who wait for him, otherwise why should evil persons be punished? Victor|