The Cruise (A Sonnet)
by Chuck Keller
Tuesday, December 12, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Upon a bright, distant, glimmering star
as I gaze skyward with sweet fantasies,
wondering, so bewildered, where you are
while dreaming of cruising o'er distant seas
with you sunbathing while sipping champagne
and dreaming, together, we shall remain.
Oh, such a voyage should last forever.
rising and falling with the waves and tides.
Love and passion our constant endeavor
like one of those great "tunnel of Love" rides.
Dreamers in love, ah, what could better, be
than spending our lives out on the blue sea?
I'll continue to dream and fantasize
and imagine gazing into your eyes.
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|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|A beautiful sonnet, indeed! What wistful dreams to have...
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Enjoyed as always...Hugssssssss|
|Reviewed by Taylor Ryan
|Oh, he writes sonnets too...fantasies to realities...I think strawberries and chocolate would go nicely with this and the champagne of your dreams! Quite a voyage, Chuck.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|And a sonnet is most definitely is, Mr. Keller. When it comes to that greatest of all mysteries . . . Love . . . Too much can never be written about it . . . Here is the address for a FREE download of my novel, "fairy!: A Cautionary Tale," if you want to check it out . . . http://www.lulu.com/content/572010 . . . Merry Christmas|