|Reviewed by John Williams
|This is truly an amazing piece. It is so true, it is the situation of my life right now. Applause all around.|
|Reviewed by Nihjah Perkins
|that is so good that how i feel about this boy i go with|
|Reviewed by Melissa Smalt
|love is so frustrating....i hate needing love so badly too! Great emotion!|
|Reviewed by Annali Allen (Reader)
|it's great that you can express that emotion, of love that can never be and a hate that will never leave. Every one deals with this dam emotion.|
|Reviewed by Felicia
|I love it! It seams like everyone feels the same way about love, the part thats says "Because I love you, and I hate that I do, I'll never have you" is true in my case. Keep writing, this is a great poem.|
|Reviewed by Claire
|Oh wow. I've been trying to write a poem that expresses how I feel about this guy (whose name shall not be given. lol) and I just cant. But look, you did it for me! PERFECTLY TOO! lol I love the hell out of poem its great. Keep writing!!!
"Stop me cuz I'm falling into your eyes again... If I could fall into you, would you catch me? Would you love me? Would you hate my love too?"
Those lines are so perfect for what Im going through right now I felt like crying. Yes crying (as embaressing as that is). And if you knew me you would know that it takes alot to make me cry. God Bless. Keep writing. :)
|Reviewed by Cat Harvey
|I hate unrequited love too.
This poem really identifies with how I feel
|Reviewed by R
that's a really nice poem. I think i feel like that sometimes. Keep writing. It's great.
|Reviewed by Nikki Cassidee (Reader)
|thats exactley what im feeling lately!this is such a good poem!keep writing an ill keep reading!talk to me sometime.|
|Reviewed by Jeffrey Callico (Reader)
|And do you hate yourself? If so, why? At your age? How come you're such an angry young boy/man?|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you hate to love...interesting...|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|"I hate my love for you." Excellent line...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|This was very good Timothy! There is only one thin line between "love" and "hate", and your poem illustrated it very well.
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Such emotion..Great write, Timothy!|