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| Reviewed by John Williams |
10/18/2007 |
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| This is truly an amazing piece. It is so true, it is the situation of my life right now. Applause all around. |
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| Reviewed by Nihjah Perkins |
4/23/2007 |
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| that is so good that how i feel about this boy i go with |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Smalt |
9/25/2006 |
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| love is so frustrating....i hate needing love so badly too! Great emotion! |
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| Reviewed by Annali Allen (Reader) |
4/26/2003 |
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| it's great that you can express that emotion, of love that can never be and a hate that will never leave. Every one deals with this dam emotion. |
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| Reviewed by Felicia |
4/26/2003 |
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| I love it! It seams like everyone feels the same way about love, the part thats says "Because I love you, and I hate that I do, I'll never have you" is true in my case. Keep writing, this is a great poem. |
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| Reviewed by Claire |
3/30/2003 |
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Oh wow. I've been trying to write a poem that expresses how I feel about this guy (whose name shall not be given. lol) and I just cant. But look, you did it for me! PERFECTLY TOO! lol I love the hell out of poem its great. Keep writing!!!
"Stop me cuz I'm falling into your eyes again... If I could fall into you, would you catch me? Would you love me? Would you hate my love too?"
Those lines are so perfect for what Im going through right now I felt like crying. Yes crying (as embaressing as that is). And if you knew me you would know that it takes alot to make me cry. God Bless. Keep writing. :) |
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| Reviewed by Cat Harvey |
1/27/2003 |
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I hate unrequited love too.
This poem really identifies with how I feel |
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| Reviewed by R |
10/31/2002 |
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Hey,
that's a really nice poem. I think i feel like that sometimes. Keep writing. It's great. |
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| Reviewed by Nikki Cassidee (Reader) |
10/25/2002 |
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| thats exactley what im feeling lately!this is such a good poem!keep writing an ill keep reading!talk to me sometime. |
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| Reviewed by Jeffrey Callico (Reader) |
8/6/2002 |
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| And do you hate yourself? If so, why? At your age? How come you're such an angry young boy/man? |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/20/2002 |
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| you hate to love...interesting... |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
6/16/2002 |
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| "I hate my love for you." Excellent line... |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/16/2002 |
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This was very good Timothy! There is only one thin line between "love" and "hate", and your poem illustrated it very well.
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Linda Hill |
6/16/2002 |
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| Such emotion..Great write, Timothy! |
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