|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Love the humor..
I'm real late reading this one
Take care Lori
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|I'm late to this one, but thanks for the smile. :-) ~~Nordette|
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Ho, ho, ho ~ I love your humour Lori!
I trust you had a great Christmas, and wish for you a wonderful 2007!! Happy Everything ... and keep writing!
Love, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by Theresa Koch
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I missed this at Christmas but it is still very funny. Thank you for sharing your wit, Lori. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by J.L. Day
|LOVED this piece! Often wondered what might be going on behind those twinkling eyes!|
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Cute write Lori, sorry I didn't get to it sooner. Holly|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It was almost good. No, truth be told, it was its truth that came through. I'm sure most Santas have almost bad traits they try to hide from us. Cute and funny.
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|LOL - Love it!
A Keeper Lori~
Off to the VAult it goesssss!
I could picture you at the Mall, sitting there writing on the bench!
Happy!!!!!!! Holidays Sweetie~
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|Cute Lori and so entertaining. Thank you for the smiles.
Merry Chrsitmas Lori, to you and your family and loved ones, and a very Happy New Year too.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|Cute write Lori Loved it
thanks for sharing
Peace be with you
Merry Christmas, to You and family
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|funny read--thanks for the sacrifice! what would we do without them?|
|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|Wonderful prose for the holidays and nice for a holiday card. Santa must have had a bit too much egg nog! Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Ho..ho..ho...thnaks for sharing!!
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|A well balanced sense of humor you pen. Makes my morn! Hope Santa recovers soon :o)
Merry Christmas to you...
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|I needed to read this to make my day. Loved it.
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|A wonderful tale, Lori, told from the jolly fat man's point of view very astutely! So clever ... and if he weren't fictional, probably more true than not! LOL
|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|This is too funny!
Thanks for the early morning chuckle!
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|And Ho Ho and Merry Christmas to you, Lori! I'm sure Santa will soon recover, and remember the rest!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|You tickled the funny bone with this one Lori, thanks for my first smile of the day.
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|You have a fine sense of humor. Poor Santa, not even able to go to the toilet!!! Fine poem. Victor|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|There you go, Lori, cutting in on my humor area, but doing a damn fine job of it, nonetheless...e & r|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|LOL!!! It is a job for a very special (or relatively intoxicated) individual, for sure. I could never do the Santa thing because I would probably be giving the kids a lecture about appreciating what they have and also about the true meaning of the holiday. I always thought that those Santa guys were scary, some unknown masked guy hugging me and bouncing me on his knee, not something I was used to doing on a regular basis; not to mention them leaving for a break every few minutes while I was waiting in line so my parents could get the kid with Santa photo for the grandparents. What was with the break?? Santa spends an entire day delivering toys from an airborne sleigh...I never heard a single tale of him stopping to pee. Even as a kid, I didn't understand the manditory break times of the "Union Santas." Lots of humor as well as a strong dose of reality in this entertaining poem.