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Naked Innocence


Vessel of birth, chalice for thirst
Arise on the morn, hover the earth
Sleep gently stranger, rest unrevealed
Breathing the air, coming unsealed

Wombed in the flight over the sea
Cracking the shell, breath of the free
Dawn of a life, fresh as a breeze
Fruit of the deed, harvested seed

Innocence filled, innocence spilled
Genuine heart, tempo instilled
Sleep softly now, as time commands
Conformity, rules, and tribal demands

Stretch in the luxury of naked skin
Clueless of vanities, shameful as sin
Judge not another, judge not yourself
By innocence true , there lies your wealth

Come knowing naught, yet knowing all
Ascending before, the cry & the crawl
Ascending, descending gently to earth
Vessel of worth.....spiritual birth



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Reviewed by CJ Heck 1/7/2007
This is beautiful, Anita. Soft, flowing, and graceful in thought and meaning. I enjoyed this very much -- your picture above is perfect for the poem!
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 1/1/2007
Very captivating!
Reviewed by Miss Pandora 12/28/2006
Beautiful, clever and very moving piece. From inception, would that spiritual growth kept pace with the physical ;) Panda :)
Reviewed by E. Richardson 12/28/2006
oh this is so good...lyrical, intriguing...superb imagery...outstanding rhythm.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 12/26/2006
Five stars for this magnificent poem of birth and worth!

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Reviewed by jude forese 12/24/2006
graceful, captivating poem, Pax ...
Reviewed by Chrissy McVay 12/24/2006
Brilliant prose! Love the picture as well.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams 12/24/2006
Lovely and lyrical, very ethereal. Thank you, Anita. Merry Christmas! ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten 12/24/2006
"...Judge not another, judge not yourself
By innocence true , there lies your wealth" ~ These lines especially~ Your poem is one we all should ponder over...for a lifetime, no less!
A keeper...Amen to your thoughts!
Love and Peace~
Reviewed by Art Sun 12/23/2006
Truth...through the birth of spiritual awareness...

nice display of this thought...

Art Sun...
Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall 12/23/2006
A beautiful poetic image and so well written. I like your tight but flowing construction. JM
Reviewed by Aberjhani 12/23/2006
Stunningly beautiful and gloriously profound.
Reviewed by Taylor Ryan 12/22/2006
This is fabulous, Anita...innocence born...found again or reborn anew..."By innocence true , there lies your wealth..."
Christmas love and hugs,

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 12/22/2006
Great Xmas poem Anita!!

Merry Christmas to you and your family!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Lew Duffey 12/22/2006
And we all stand naked before the power of God. Naked and vulnerable and yet protected by his love. Welcome back. This is a beautiful write.
God Bless,
Reviewed by Approximately Naive 12/22/2006
Ah, nakedness and innocense before the apple.
We come into the world naked, we go out naked, and in the beginning, we were meant to live naked. Trust Eve to go and spoil our innocense!
We try to cover up our hearts as well. Who amongst us wants to show this naked to the world?
Reviewed by Butch Howard 12/22/2006
A lovely Christmas poem Anita! I like the reconcilliation of opposites here. Outstanding! This is my favorite part:
"Come knowing naught, yet knowing all
Ascending before, the cry & the crawl
Ascending, descending gently to earth
Vessel of worth.....spiritual birth"
Merry Christmas!
Reviewed by J.L. Day 12/22/2006
Awe inspiring! NICE tug on the strings leading from creator to soul.
Reviewed by Paul Williams 12/22/2006
A superbly gentle sojourn through the sea of birthing Anita, I just love that pic. Sublimely inspired...

hugs for Zoe.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 12/22/2006
Quite captivating, Queenie - both the poem and the unique graphic.
Reviewed by C. Nichols 12/21/2006
Great poem, I enjoyed this very much. Deep...
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) 12/21/2006
Great style and gracefulness in this poem. Victor
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 12/21/2006
...and that precious seed comes to us, knowing more than we have answers for and understand more than will be remembered. It seems to me that we start out a lot wiser than we become, and then with age, we gain the wisdom of all we had forgotten. Life seems like a replay where we have a second opportunity not to make the same mistakes as the lifetime before. This is a beautiful poem, Anita, written with such grace and wonderful flow..and of course, you just gotta know that I love the rhyme!
Take care,
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 12/21/2006
Beautiful write
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/21/2006
glorious picture and poem, lady a; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Felix Perry 12/21/2006
This is fantastic, the poem and the graphic are both so filled with birth and life that they blend together almost in a perfect harmony of the senses.

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