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I'm Losing it!
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Thursday, January 11, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Going in the wind.

I'm losing it,
away goes my wit.
I've lost it before,
so I know the score,
the devils knocking on my door.
He never quits knocking,
my lifes always rocking,
it use to come to socking.

Everyone I socked,
was devil docked.
They needed a beating,
some even deleting.
Just like some of these phony poets,
like some of us don't know it.

I try not to judge,
some of these fools evily grudge.
Their creativity,
is in their evil activity.
If they could,
they'd eat at us
like termites after wood.

Eat at me,
I'll give you more chit than
your eyes can see.
Cause I'm about to leave anyway,
tired of all this phony play.
I could be working on my books,
instead of fooling with evil crooks.

Like I said I'm losing it quick,
I might throw a brick.
Right in a deserving face,
then get the heck out of this place.



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Reviewed by Ken Connelly 1/14/2007
At one time in my career I was lead use of force instructor and SRT leader on my shift. Everyone expected so much out of me. My peers, inmates, my ex wife, friends, you know the drill. I snapped, could not take it anymore. I switched to a boot camp program for youth where I found myself. You above poem put it straight, to the punch, the core. Direct! Wonderful work.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 1/12/2007
Please do not let them suck you in Grady!!

We who love your work would be the once losing your great wit...not them!!


Love Tinka
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 1/11/2007
Please don't leave,there not worth it..I would really miss you and your work Hugssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) 1/11/2007
*OnePoet, no matter what has been said, no matter what has been done; you have made a differnce in my life. I know some can't see it 'cause I'm writing those dark poems, but Lord, I'd be bored if all my poems were the same. I need variety. But you know what you need better than anyone else; so far be it from me to question, but I will. "By the way, I do hope this is just another fictional rant." God Bless you my friend, love Holly
Reviewed by CJ Heck 1/11/2007
Don't go, my friend. Whatever it is, it will pass. We would miss you and your work, okay?
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu 1/11/2007
I don't know if this is fantasy or real,but if real i'd hope you not stay away to long.Will miss your work..Be strong my friend.
God Bless,
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine 1/11/2007
Hang in. R

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