a Perfect 10
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Sunday, January 14, 2007
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I can't be beat any worse, the only thing I haven't done is died.
A perfect ten missing nine,
just like this life of mine.
Nine digits off,
life hasn't landed soft.
I don't miss the other fractions,
even though they're
I deal with the one remaining,
at least I have something sustaining.
I could have lost all ten,
have to start completely over again.
I know one digits not much,
but it's the important one
that kept me in touch.
Some run with a phony superior,
they can't deal with being inferior.
When you've lost almost all,
with the devil coming to call,
and you're still here,
even one digit is most dear.
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|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Powerful write One! Yes, one is all it takes ... thoroughly dear when it's still here!
Love, Suzie :-D
|Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
|Most creative!! R|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
|Love this, you are a very creative poet my friend...wouldn't have meant as much if it came from anyone other...love the last line...and you're still here even one digit is most dear...enjoyed this much!
Blessings my friend,
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Creative offering...A perfect ten indeed!!
Love tinka ")
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|I found this write quite interesting ONE!
The Who- is my 1st thought here... ! is the LOneliest # that you ever knew... 2 can be as bad as 1 - it's the...
I love your Positive Upbeat attitude Charm : )
Reminds me a cat with 9 lives too!
You my dear are a perfect 10
With such honesty pourring out of your pen!
Warmest HuGs, Warrior Sheeeooxx
|Reviewed by Gloria Buono Daly
|When I read your title I thought of Bo Derek. Then it brought a few laughs but now I'm hoping that you are healthy and well and stay this way for a very long time. My best, Gloria|
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|bravo, One! this is perfect proof of your great appreciation and attitude..
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|very creative... :)|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Wow...that really sums up a ten
different I liked it's very cool
One poet I love you your message
Within this poem it's long as you
have the most important digit of life
that gives you strength and peace to your
heart you're a complete 10!!
Love And Peace To You Always..Morning Star
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very well written excursion to your life's equation ...|
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Very well put, Grady. I always forget that you are now "One Poet" and often miss reading your offerings.
|Reviewed by Sue Hess
|too cool. i really like this|
|Reviewed by Ken Connelly
|Very pleasant and direct. In a very dry way, I STRONGLY ENJOYED IT!|