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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
1/20/2007 |
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We are our heart's keeper and we tend to dwell too long on the parts of someone elses heart that we have no control over. This is sad.
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
1/20/2007 |
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You captured the feeling well!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
1/20/2007 |
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| hope is what gets you through it... |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
1/20/2007 |
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| Excellent write |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
1/19/2007 |
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| this poem works well reading it from bottom up also ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
1/19/2007 |
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| Where there's hope there are answers to trap doors.Excellent poem! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/19/2007 |
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| The trap door is within us all and we control it. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
1/19/2007 |
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| Smile a lot, that pisses off the gremlins . . . |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
1/19/2007 |
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| Michael, I believe most adults that live upon this earth have felt trapped in some way or another but the way for existence is to know, that you know, you control the reins of your soul and you can get relief. This says a lot! |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
1/19/2007 |
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| Ah Love can be cruel sometimes. Think of your new grandchild instead. Victor |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
1/19/2007 |
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| All the feelings that tear at us human beings from time to time. Your expression is well worth praises! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
1/19/2007 |
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To give up~Impossible
To hope~Probable
Hope is a truly marvelous thing, Michael. |
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