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Can You Wish Me Into Focus?
by Susan K. de Vegter
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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I feel the very precense of your energy
I know not why you come
Especially for me
I want you to be the old love
Come back with passion's fire
Compassion in your every breath
But I know that is a lie
Sweet mystery who speaks to me
Can you repair this heart
Have you come to tempt my spirit
Bring back to it the spark
The essence it's been missing
It's passion in a void
The wonton full spontaneity
That somehow goes ignored
Can you wish me into focus
With a promise that will keep
Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep
Or sing me into heaven
Pronounce my every sigh
Never leave me lonely
And never make me cry
Mystery love of passion's call
Why do you come for me
Do you come within a miracle
Or do you come to watch me bleed?

Susan Kathryn de Vegter
copyright 2007



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Lovely love song.

Ron
Reviewed by Stan Grimes
Great write!!!

Thanks for sharing,

Stan
Reviewed by CJ Heck
This is so good, Susan. The emotions follow your readers along word by word, overflowing the page with sadness. It's so real and wonderfully done.
Love,
CJ
Reviewed by Robert Harrison
First find, first read, first comment, Exquisite.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Wow. See below
Reviewed by Aberjhani
For this reader, the appropriate response to certain poems is a single syllable, which in this case would be: Wow!

Aberjhani
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
W O W, Susan, you made me tear up with the emotion in this poignant read.......he don't know WHAT he missed. Methinks he lost his chance to find out........EXCELLENT!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I Like what Victor said...lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Approximately Naive
Can you wish me into focus
With a promise that will keep
Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep
Or sing me into heaven
Pronounce my every sigh

Rythmic!

How often unrequited love bleeds the heart, yet how electric when it rides into our lives on a chariot of flaming passion!
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
Lovers take feelings for granted after awhile,If wishing for that old passion and spark do something to energize each other,Go somewhere or plan that special evening,Wine,candle light dinner,
Both of you in the kitchen having fun,Thanks for sharing,Excellent,
Michael
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
H knows not what's he's losing. All he needs is a kick ....lovely poem Susan.
Reviewed by H Cruz
Warm! I wish I could; "wish me into focus" sometimes or perhaps it should be ficus. They say the Ficus tree loses its leaves when it is moved from its current place of existence; our fawna is internal not eternal... :)
Reviewed by Simon Barreiros
Beautiful write Susan. Once again a strong, loving heartimbued with a child like wish for love ever lasting. The naivete and openess of the child blending with the passion of a deep and complex woman seamlessly. The Goddess is alive and well in your voice.
Love you,
simon
Reviewed by jude forese
your focus is keen and your poem is suggestively beautiful ...
Reviewed by Randall Barfield
something special about "rock me into midnight" keep it up
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Oh what a glorious wordsmith you are dear Susan! Such love poems belong in a book!;-)
Reviewed by George Carroll
Ah a mysterious lover who once had your heart leaving you with wants that cannot be satisfied or can he?
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Sweet thoughts of the burning energy thatlove creates in the atmosphere around hearts. Your energy is strong and elicits the love of others easily. Beatiful look at what love can generate in auras of passion.

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