|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Lovely love song.
|Reviewed by Stan Grimes
Thanks for sharing,
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|This is so good, Susan. The emotions follow your readers along word by word, overflowing the page with sadness. It's so real and wonderfully done.
|Reviewed by Robert Harrison
|First find, first read, first comment, Exquisite.|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Wow. See below|
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|For this reader, the appropriate response to certain poems is a single syllable, which in this case would be: Wow!
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|W O W, Susan, you made me tear up with the emotion in this poignant read.......he don't know WHAT he missed. Methinks he lost his chance to find out........EXCELLENT!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I Like what Victor said...lol!!
|Reviewed by Tactfully Naive
|Can you wish me into focus
With a promise that will keep
Can you rock me into midnight
Hold me tightly while I sleep
Or sing me into heaven
Pronounce my every sigh
How often unrequited love bleeds the heart, yet how electric when it rides into our lives on a chariot of flaming passion!
|Reviewed by Michael Mathieu
|Lovers take feelings for granted after awhile,If wishing for that old passion and spark do something to energize each other,Go somewhere or plan that special evening,Wine,candle light dinner,
Both of you in the kitchen having fun,Thanks for sharing,Excellent,
|Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
|H knows not what's he's losing. All he needs is a kick ....lovely poem Susan.|
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|Warm! I wish I could; "wish me into focus" sometimes or perhaps it should be ficus. They say the Ficus tree loses its leaves when it is moved from its current place of existence; our fawna is internal not eternal... :)|
|Reviewed by Simon Barreiros
|Beautiful write Susan. Once again a strong, loving heartimbued with a child like wish for love ever lasting. The naivete and openess of the child blending with the passion of a deep and complex woman seamlessly. The Goddess is alive and well in your voice.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|your focus is keen and your poem is suggestively beautiful ...|
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|something special about "rock me into midnight" keep it up|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Oh what a glorious wordsmith you are dear Susan! Such love poems belong in a book!;-)|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Ah a mysterious lover who once had your heart leaving you with wants that cannot be satisfied or can he?|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sweet thoughts of the burning energy thatlove creates in the atmosphere around hearts. Your energy is strong and elicits the love of others easily. Beatiful look at what love can generate in auras of passion.