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Lost in a Reality that doesn't Exist... by Ed Matlack Sunday, January 28, 2007 Rated "G" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

I can’t find Rene’ I can’t find where we stay, He said he talked to the doctor, I only found to talk to a proctor… Our home a conglomeration, Within itself its own nation, Room after room of walls & no doors, Climbing the walls the only way out… Was this a dream or a nightmare, To go back to sleep I am scared, They say if I don’t get high I’m square, I wish I just knew of my location where… © ed ~ 1/28/07

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Reviewed by Susan de Vegter	1/28/2007

When we have fears durng the day it is himan to stash them away. Trouble is they come out when we have no control of our stash as we sleep. Renee just isnlt there right now. She's fine. You're fine and Rufuz is in control There's safety knowing that. Stay kewl! Susan




Reviewed by Sherry Heim	1/28/2007

Our mind, while we are sleeping, can play tricks on us, especially if we have got any insecurities or difficulties facing us in our reality. I hate those dreams that just seem to go on and on with no solution in sight. I awake and when I go back to sleep, the dream continues. It is like being stuck inside some insane video game with no possibility of winning no matter which level we choose. Nice work, Ed. Take care, Sherry




Reviewed by Joyce Bowling	1/28/2007

Great write my friend, what a nightmare...I think? I know I have had those dreams of searching for something or someone and cannot seem to find it anywhere, no doors..yes, this sounds like a nightmare, maybe it was what you ate last night...happens to me if I eat onion rings, or mexican late in the evenings...enjoyed this one much! Blessings, Joyce Bowling




Reviewed by richard cederberg	1/28/2007

Powerful Title Ed. Dreams can certainly be unsettling. I had one this last week that shook me pretty good. I wrote about it! Who says if you don't get high you're square? If that's true than I'm as square as they come. Oh well. Good write friend ... Richard Lloyd Cederberg




Reviewed by Danielle Mundy	1/28/2007

:( you seem sad Ed. HUGS from Ohio.




Reviewed by Crissy Foster	1/28/2007

Umm... I felt that way in Washington, maybe you are there?




Reviewed by Art Sun	1/28/2007

interesting write...




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	1/28/2007

And you think I need help??!! Go sit outside in the snow again in your undies, and call me in the morning!